Where to begin
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- Knifes on the torso are way to small.
- Looks like he has a reseeding hairline.
- The alpha mapped hair looks good but I think its too short.
- Don't forget the little hairs that hang over his face
- Skin tone should be more pink, its really yellow atm.
- Chest armor should be darker, with more edging.
- The cube on the knife on his belt is too small, and the whole knife itself is a bit small.
- Don't forget to add little imperfections to the skin, such as scratches scars cuts dirt...stuff like that. It make it look alot more realistic.
- And looking at his hair in the ref on gamespot, his hair is brown with sharp highlights, not pitch black.
Like you said, its wip. But I think ur doing damn good so far, he has so many acessories...
And on tekniks part, the metal looks amazing, but I think it would look alot better if it had some color to it, like in the render on gamspot, really dark with a hint of blue
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