AGAIN I AM! BUT WITH GOTEN

[PiXel]

AFTER CRITZ :laff:
ok i know the hair don´t looks good i would be fix it so but more critz !
(next time more scrennshots

 

[Seph`]

Can I just say... That looks terrible!
I'll try to help you out - His arms are too chubby for a start, and the shoulders need to be changed to suit his clothing. the base seems ok but could do with some thickening out.

The face seems a little flat, but its fine and dandy, and the hair is ok, you just need that front but thats really cool on Goten/Gohan/Goku :]

I hope I've helped you in getting ideas to sort your model ^_^

Seph

 

[PiXel]

thanks u helped so MUCH (=KISS) i would be fix it all so i make it 2 days

 

[Nuttzy]

yikes, my only crits would be to redo the entire model, or find a good front ref of goten and scale it to fit right over that,

cuz it looks nothing of goten atm

 

[PiXel]

RIGHT! its not from azn its only the base model from nuttzy and a little work from me NUTTZY what did u mean with "my only crits would be to redo the entire model" i don´t know what u mean but i fixed some thing on this model here

so here
three others http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/goten_behind.jpg http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/goten_right.jpg http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/goten_left.jpg
AND NUTTZY?


please can i give u the model and u fixed the hair or something what u dont like on this model?

 

[Eon]

IT's way out of proportion, the shoulder area is all weird nice try, keep working on it

 

[Just-a-guy]

I suggest you to start with editing SMALL parts of models, this looks, erm, right word for it...:cry:

 

[PiXel]

well i try to make the hair u don´t see what i did yet i would be realese it totmorow the picture of the new goten u rigt it don´t look good i see it with my own eays.
but i work on it now and i try to make a skin so be hope full

 

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[PiXel]

http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/gotennew.jpg
http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/gotennew2.jpg
http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/gotennew3.jpg
new pictures !!!!
well the hair don´t fixed i know but i made it in a other time.
well, i fixed the head and the neck well sonner came the waist and the fixed hair

 

[Cold Steel]

looking a bit better i guess, but keep working at your skills, and one day you might be as good as some other modelers here.

 

[Suh Dude]

err did u forget credits again? Basebody=Nuttzy
erm um its umm good.

 

[PiXel]

ok i looked on the model of azn but i don´t copied something i lokked and i see there i make a sttrong bad ugly wrong thing the head and the hair so i would be made it ohters so next time i give u pictures when the head was readdy and the hair look REALLY REALLY BETER!!!!!


*edit*
PUUUUUHHHHHHH the work are so hard to make a good goten AAAHHHH.... :fight:
but i keep cool so here are new pictures in .jp(e)g
and i NOTHING copied NOTHING u can think what u woukld be thing i sad i looked at the model (goten) from azn, but i nothing copied :warning:
so here http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/gotenskinb.jpg
and http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/gotenskinf.jpg
ooh i forgot its not the really skin ive got some one how would be make a skinbut i need a animator and a skeleton maker! (maybe a animator ...
i don´t need the animator really but i would be happy when some one comes)

*ps: blacky i would be make my grammatik better i know there i am wrote some words more than other words and i was 12 years old so i learning enlgish :

 

[Black-Sheep]

@German Boy

well let's say....
....it's a start, keep on working and you'll improve your skill....

PS:
was ist mit deiner Gramatik passiert? Irgendwie verwendest du "etwas" eigenwillige Zeitformen, bzw vermischst du sie ziehmlich stark...

eg:
"ok i looked on the model of azn but i don´t copied something i lokked and i see there i make a sttrong bad ugly wrong thing the head and the hair so i would be made it ohters so next time i give u pictures when the head was readdy and the hair look REALLY REALLY BETER!!!!!"

Translation:
I looked on the model of azn but didn't copy anything!
I noticed that i did the hair and the head wrong, so I'll ( I will [will-future]) do it better next time.
As soon as the new head and hair will be ready i'll show you some pictures of it.

hoffe, dass ich einige Unklarheiten beseitigen konnte.
I hope that the other guy's here could understand it too.

mfg
Blacky

 

[PiXel]

http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/gotenskinb.jpg
and http://tryforce.free-host.com/goten/gotenskinf.jpg
how of them u like!! this what befor or that what ive got yet ?? :talk: :warning: i nothing copied NOTHING!

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

err did u forget credits again? Basebody=Nuttzy
erm um its umm good.

it has nuttzy's name on the pic ^_^

Edit: hey kid ure going to get into trouble with the feds if you dont post credits to the esf goku skinner

 

[PiXel]

ARGH WHY U NOT ANSWERED TO MY QUESTIN??
find u the model yet better or not??
the skin would be others and i would bemade the waist!
how of this models u like this befor or this yet ? please answer

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

riiiiight

Well answer of mine to the from the post of the you made question is... first one better i like... no offense

 

[Bolteh2]

ok, some things need to get of my chest:

1) you got a model with somewhat nice hair (not attached, just pasted on it etc, not skinned and misplaced at some places, but at least it looked right, i comment the original modller for that)
2) you ended up with somewhat the worst hair ive ever seen on a super saiyan model (again misplaced etc, and no comments to original modeller)
3) give credits to original skinner of the goku skin (its not because its property of esf thats its free to use without crediting)
4) Wie alt sind sie? (how old are you) because you have some real problems with english :\ so if you are a youngster, its ok... if you are older (15+) well... then it aint normal anymore :\ .. i am belgian and i understand the mistaes you make.. dutch and german both have the same sentence build up... english and german dont have the same sentence build up... you make a german sentence and then you translate every word to english without replacing them... (its kinda easy for me to understand because u just translate your sentence to dutch and then the sentence makes sence :O)

hint: watch more english movies and learn (preferably with german subtitles)

 

[PiXel]

well u sad i forgot to give into the credits the name of the the skinner (esf team=right) but i sad the skin don´t would be this this skin for goten looks like sh*t or? i made the skin to see how he looks i color. so!
BTW: s--bolt- first i sad the credits and i say the skin are not that would be been what u see. then the hair are distrubet and i think it so ok :laff: and when i wrote anything in english ... i wrote fast and don´t look at the points,
and some times i tipped on the wrong boutton :smile: