A SUPER SAIYAN Story :)

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lol, makes me feel al lil better :) hey im working on a new video, but i cant show it dont have s host, is you want to see it i need a host :)
 
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People voted no because there either A. Blind B. Cant read C. hates reading and storys D. want to see if no wins E. more n more
 
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Some bad news, My computer is F****** messed up, its going all screwie :) neways it has cahpters 6,7,8 i cant start it up so i dont know id this weeks is going to be out, tright now im on my borthers computer so trhis is how im telling you
 
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i will if i can, but my borther is being an ass boutt hings and keeping the compture to him self...
 
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hey, if you guys want to help just send money to
1016 apt c rentville ohio HA! i wish naw, but if you guys no of neways to fix me comp tell me and il be able to write mor eof the story :)


heres the problem.

i start up the computer, it gets to the Windows loading screen with the bar going across and then it will load to a screen that is blank with a blinking _ in the upper left hadn conner. no commands work.
 
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sounds like MS-DOS. you tried typing exit?

if that don't work, i can send ya to a site where you can get help. I'll pm you the site if you need it.
 
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Sorry about the computer problem but Tsunami seems to know that he is talking about so try his advise.

And your story is great,will continue reading it untill it ends. Iam very curious about 2 things which iam dying to read about in your story.Which is how this John has saying blood in him and how or what "Vegeta" and "Goku" is. Keep up the good work plz dont stop writing!
 
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Yes i will continue to write, and i wi;ll take his advice if what im trying does not work, and ffor the sayian blood thing and vegeta... :):) all will be told in due time :laff: :laff:
 
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ok heres the latest :) its very short the long version well chapter 7 will be out this week sorry bout the wait the magna is stil being worked on 1st chapter s done and second is being worked on the dfirst one is pretty long :)

Three Surviving Super Saiyans
Written by: Tank


John Schmahl, AKA Fever, a normal 16 year old boy. Every morning he did he normal schedule, get up at 6:00 A.M., get ready for school, come home, do his chores, get on computer. His life needed change. Every since he had become involved in the Anime “SBU” (Strongest Beings in the Universe) He has been obsessed with the feeling of becoming the strongest. He believes that becoming a Super Being is Possible. He believed he was “The One.” One day, his life changed…..

Chapter 1: Abduction.
“Mom, ill see you later, going to school!” John said with a loud voice
He went out of his two story house and started to walk down his driveway, by the time he got to his driveway he stopped.
“What was that?” he said with suspicion “That was weird….I swear I could feel some-”
In a blink of an eye, he was gone.. No one saw it, but what had happened?
“Wh-Wh-Wher-Where am I?” he said with a dazed look
He noticed he was tied to a chair, and couldn’t move. He was in a dark room with a spotlight on him, lighting the only part of the room. Out of the dark came a voice.
“You are what you think you are, you just don’t know how to set free your aptitude.”
“Who are you? WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME!?! If its money…we’re bro-”
“It’s not money. We want just you, and you only. You have a purpose” The man said, slowly walking around the room. “Your Destiny, We-” he was cut off by a loud screech.
“WE? There’s more of you?” John said with a scared glare.
“Yes, We.. We took you because you are our only hope, The world’s only hope…” he stepped forward into the light.
“What do you mean…I’m the world’s only hope?” he said looking in his eyes
“In due time, you will know everything you will need to know. But until that time, you will remain clueless.” he said stepping backwards out of the light. John heard a door open and shut. He remained silent….until he heard voices outside the door.
“We have to tell him now, we cant waist anymore time Gohan! You have to tell him, we’re going to need all the time we can get and you know this.” He said with a whispered voice.
“TELL ME WHAT!?!” John said yelling at the door. At the same time they walked in. They started walking around the room, until they came to john’s back side.
“We are going to let you go, not out of this room, but untie you.” Gohan said as he reached for the chain that strapped him down. At the same time, he started to explain what was going on.
“John, the reason you are here….is because your not human….you’re a Sai-” gohan was cut off.
“NOT HUMAN YOU GUYS ARE CRAZY!” John said quickly.
“As I was saying, Your not human, You’re a Saiyan. One of the strongest beings in the world.” Gohan said looking at John.
“We have taken you to teach you how to release your Saiyan- Jin power to its fullest extent. Have you ever felt like you have Bardo’s powers off of SBU and Try and do a Two way beam?” Gohan said looking at him with question, “Well we call that a KA-Me-Ha-Me-Ha, Very powerful. Just like you…” Gohan said walking around to the front of him and looking him the eyes.
:I don’t understand, I’m suppose to be the strongest person in the universe?” John said
“Yes you are, you just don’t know it, that’s why you’re here….” Gohan said l looking at the ground.
He untied John and moved away, John got up slowly and started to say.
“So you guys aren’t here to kill me or kidnap me are you? Your really serious about this.” he said with a concerned expression.
He got up and started to walk around.
“Follow me. It is time to start….” Gohan said and walked out of the room…

CHAPTER 2 : Time of peace and sorrow…

“What is this place?” John asked with Suspicion walking around.
“This place, an old warehouse, that we fixed up.” He said leading the way.
“Will I be training here?” He looked around he heard some snickering from Gohan “What’s so funny?”
Ha! You train here……You need a planet for your abilities.” He said smirking. “Continue this way, were almost there.” As he picked up speed.
“I need a planet to train….there’s no way I’m that strong…am I?” He said looking bewildered.
“You will find out soon enough…” Gohan said, “Here we are, next room.”
“ Trunks! You Ready GO!?!” He yelled through out the open warehouse.
“Trunks, Gohan…where do you get these names from?” He asked jokingly.
“The machine isn’t functioning properly, it will take me about 30 minuets to fix.” Trunks yelled.
“Long story kid-” Gohan said
“We have 30 minuets, tell-away.” John said Sarcastically. Gohan sighed, “Mine as well.” he said in a depressed way. He sat on the ground and started to talk.
“About 200 years ago, I had a family, so did Trunks….while our families died of old age, Trunks and I stayed our young ages, me being 29 and him being 19...We had to watch our families die off one by one…Goku, My dad being the strongest of all the saiyans… died first, My mother Chi-Chi second, and my brother Goten last, of old age. We got these names by our fathers and mother, I was named after my grandfather, Grandpa Gohan. And Trunks…He’s another story. He would have to tell you.”
There was a long pause.. Then John answered.
“Ok let me get this straight your over 200 years old!?!” John said
“Yes, I am 232 ½ years old.” John said with depression
“H-Ho-How did you get so old?” John said with sympathy.
“Along time ago I saved the world from a evil creature named Cell. During that time I reached Super Saiyan 2. My dad Goku collected balls with special abilities called Dragon balls. We used those to wish all the people who had been killed on that day back to life. Years later, we used them again, except this time, we weren’t using them, an evil prince was using them. He was wishing for immortality. We couldn’t let it happen. When we arrived he was already wishing upon the balls, I threw a beam at him, killing him, but it was to late. The wish was made, but luckily the wish didn’t respond fast enough to make him immortal, but instead passing the wish unto trunks and I.. Thus cursed forever to watch our families die out, and never have a family again.”
“That must have been hard…” John said looking at Gohan.
“It was very hard, especially for Trunks. He had one of the har-” Gohan was cut off.
“Its fixed.” Trunks yelled. Gohan got up and said, “ok, its time for you to learn the way of the Saiyan-Jin…” As Gohan went into the next room John stayed for a sec, and just thought of all the trouble Gohan had went through, and moved on silently.

Chapter 3: Impossible…
As they went into the other room, John started to wonder what they were doing.
“What exactly are we doing? Where are we going” he asked Gohan, but Gohan just kept walking into the room.
“Trunks! SET IT AND LETS GO! WE DON’T HAVE ALL DAY!” Gohan yelled th with a raising temper
“Coming just got to grab my Sword.” Trunks said running around.
“What are we doing? John asked again.
“This is a transporter, this whole entire room, It’s what trunks was work-” Gohan was brought to a halt. He stared of into the distance.
“What’s wrong?” John asked “What’s wron-”
“SHH! Be quiet…..Theres someone out there, besides Trunks, but there using a technique I’ve never felt before, I didn’t feel them at all until now…Very strong, it maybe them.. TRUNKS!!! LETS GO!! NOW, THERE HERE!! ERASE THE DATA LOG TO OUR DESTINATION!” Gohan yelled. It got very silent….Then out of the window a bright light came.
“WE HAVE TO GO!! THERE RIGHT OUTSIDE!!” Gohan Screamed. Outside he heard someone saying something, Trunks came running in the room, He went to the far end of the room and pressed a red button, at the same time John felt his body disintegrate, yet feel as if those parts were in another world. As the last pieces of John, Gohan and Trunks faded, John looked down, and when he looked up he saw this face, staring him in the eyes, then john faded into a whole new world….
“WHO THE HELL WAS THAT!?!” John said with fury and shock. He said as he went up to Gohan who had landed a few feet away with Trunks. Gohan didn’t answer though.. He just stared off into the distance like a crazed person. Trunks looked the same. He waved his hands in front of both of them.
“Hello!?!” John howled
Completely ignoring John, Gohan started to talk to Trunks.
“It couldn’t have been them” He said hysterically
“But it was, them I don’t know how but it was….What has happened….How could it be them?” Trunks said turning to Gohan.
“Who was it! Who was that Back THERE!?!” John yelled once more.
There was a long pause, and Goahn started to move.
“I-I-IT-IT was m-my father, Goku…And his father Vegeta….” Gohan whispered.



Chapter 4 - Pre-Training


Gohan looked as if he’d seen a ghost, Trunks was shocked even more. it got quiet.. Then Gohan’s color returned to his normal state and spoke up.
“No matter, You have to train, we must teach you….Trunks….Trunks!” Gohan shouted. Trunks was still in another world, “Trunks, Snap out of it, No matter the resemblance, It wasn’t them. We have to train John…He’s our last hope…He needs you….I need you.. Don’t quit o-” Gohan was cut off in the middle of his sentence.
“Gohan, Lets do it .Lets get those *******s. I now know it couldn’t have been them, My father was once evil, but not anymore, HOW DARE THEY TAKE THEIR BODIES!!!” Trunks shouted with rage standing up. “It is time John! Lets get started.” Trunks said turning around to a world of green grass and blue skies. “This planet, with its Green grass, no inhabitants, and at the edge of the Solar System : Orion’s belt ,it should be sufficient.” Trunks said brightly.
“We have less than 5 days to train.” Gohan said with a serious look.
“So….Were do we start?” John asked.
“We start by bringing out you.” Gohan said with a evil glare.
“Wha-Why you looking at me like that?” John said backing slowly away.
“ha ha ha ha….You’ll see”Gohan said smiling evilly.


Chapter 5 - It begins…

“Stop looking at me like that” John said backing up, moving across the grass.
“Stop moving, and come here…this will only hurt for a little while.” Gohan said.
“WHAT WILL ONLY HURT FOR A LITTLE WHILE!?!” John screamed, Gohan ran behind John in an instant and swung his arms around him, “Trunks come here and hold him.” Gohan said calmly. Trunks walked slowly over to john and held him from the front.
“Drop his pants trunks.” Gohan whispered
“Do what?!?!?!!” John shrieked
“Hurry up trunks.” Gohan said with a paced voice. Trunks reached one hand behind John and drop his pants halfway.
“Has your but been hurting a little bit lately john?” He asked.
“A lil, but what are you doing?” John asked. They continued to ignore him.
“Get by that tree over there, tie him up around it.” Gohan said demandingly. Trunks walked over to a tree only 7 feet away.
“John, grab on to the tree as tightly as you can, Trunks push from the back while I pull him awa-” Cut off in his sentence.
“What do you mean pull from the back while you push, What the hell are you doing!?!” John asked eagerly. Continuing to ignore him. They took there position and got ready to pull, and push.
“John, I’m serious, you might want to hold onto the tree pretty tight.” John said seriously, “On the count of 3 trunks….1.…..2.…..3!” Gohan yelled.
At a moments notice, John hurried and turned around towards the tree, and held on as tight as he could. Trunks was pushing hard against John while Gohan was pulling as hard as he could on a little bone near John’s but. At first it felt to John as if he was being compressed against a hard branchy surface, mere seconds later he felt like being pulled away into a black hole.
“IT HURTS” John screamed
“Just hold on John, Were Almost THERE!” Gohan said with a raising voice.
Gohan could feel himself falling back slightly each pull, ignoring John’s Painful screams, He repeated to pull.
John was holding on tight, more than Gohan had expected. The tree John was holding onto, was starting to crumble underneath John’s grip. The bark started to break apart in his hand, John’s hands started to retract into a fist. Gohan was still pulling, a tail had been formed out of what was there.
“STOP IT-T-TT!” John yelled.
In an instant, the tree disintegrated, forcing trunks to let go, and sending Gohan flying backwards….

After a few seconds of silence, Gohan looked up at john, and saw what he could not believe…

Chapter 6 - From the beginning.


“Full Throttle Captain Gene”
“Yes Sire, King Vegeta”
“John….JOHN! Wake up, John wake up- I think he’s coming around Trunks.” whispered a faint voice. John’s eyes slowly started to open, gradually starting to move. Gohan interrupted.
“Don’t move, you’ve been through a lot especially for you being half human. Anyways, we were very close, but we have to continue pulling your tail o-” he was disconnected with the sound of John in a dazed voice.
“Wh-Wha-What happened?” John said tiredly, “I was having a peculiar dream…some-something about a guy named….King Vegeta.” Johns eyes opened widely, “King vegeta, you said Trunks father was named Vegeta right? King Vegeta, was that Trunk’s Father?”
“We don’t have time for this, we have to continue train-” Gohan was brought to a halt. He looked up from John to Trunks, Standing there was Trunks, who looked like he was about to speak.
“No, that was Vegeta’s, My farther, farther. King Vegeta, Ruler of all Saiyans. Killed later in the Frieza attack, Don’t ask, Before that he conquered hundreds of planets with his loyal engineers with him. If you ask me I think he deserved to die, killing thousands reaching into the million margin.” Trunks said with a disgusted look upon his face, “Yes, Gohan is right we must continue.” Trunks thought walking away..
 
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Well that is an intresting turnout,getting the idea of that he is a ettling to Goku because Bardock had psychic powers and john seems to have so to seeing into the past if it wasnt a long forgotten memory. Dont mind me,just thinking out loud:) keep up the good work /your first stalking fan:]
 
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Sorry, this might be a good fan fic, but between the bad grammer, using wrong words and actually getting the names of your characters mixed up, it hurts my eyes to read it too.
 
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getting my chars mixd up? where??? wrong words??? where plz show me where...
 
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There was a long pause.. Then John answered.
“Ok let me get this straight your over 200 years old!?!” John said
“Yes, I am 232 ½ years old.” John said with depression
“H-Ho-How did you get so old?” John said with sympathy.
 
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Bihal, i like this story and i think you are overreacting just a little..if it hurts your eyes maybye you should go and see a doctor or something?:) But if you dont like the story dont read it?
 
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HAHAHAHAHAHA, thank you for pointing that char mix up. nemore plz tell me :)
this issue/chapter will be out this friday or saturday. :laff: and again the Magna,First issue will be out the 25th of December :)
 
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Well heres the latest Chapter, Chapter 7 -training.....World End?

Three Surviving Saiyans
Written by: Tank


John Schmahl, AKA Fever, a normal 16 year old boy. Every morning he did he normal schedule, get up at 6:00 A.M., get ready for school, come home, do his chores, get on computer. His life needed change. Every since he had become involved in the Anime “SBU” (Strongest Beings in the Universe) He has been obsessed with the feeling of becoming the strongest. He believes that becoming a Super Being is Possible. He believed he was “The One.” One day, his life changed…..

Chapter 1: Abduction.
“Mom, ill see you later, going to school!” John said with a loud voice
He went out of his two story house and started to walk down his driveway, by the time he got to his driveway he stopped.
“What was that?” he said with suspicion “That was weird….I swear I could feel some-”
In a blink of an eye, he was gone.. No one saw it, but what had happened?
“Wh-Wh-Wher-Where am I?” he said with a dazed look
He noticed he was tied to a chair, and couldn’t move. He was in a dark room with a spotlight on him, lighting the only part of the room. Out of the dark came a voice.
“You are what you think you are, you just don’t know how to set free your aptitude.”
“Who are you? WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME!?! If its money…we’re bro-”
“It’s not money. We want just you, and you only. You have a purpose” The man said, slowly walking around the room. “Your Destiny, We-” he was cut off by a loud screech.
“WE? There’s more of you?” John said with a scared glare.
“Yes, We.. We took you because you are our only hope, The world’s only hope…” he stepped forward into the light.
“What do you mean…I’m the world’s only hope?” he said looking in his eyes
“In due time, you will know everything you will need to know. But until that time, you will remain clueless.” he said stepping backwards out of the light. John heard a door open and shut. He remained silent….until he heard voices outside the door.
“We have to tell him now, we cant waist anymore time Gohan! You have to tell him, we’re going to need all the time we can get and you know this.” He said with a whispered voice.
“TELL ME WHAT!?!” John said yelling at the door. At the same time they walked in. They started walking around the room, until they came to john’s back side.
“We are going to let you go, not out of this room, but untie you.” Gohan said as he reached for the chain that strapped him down. At the same time, he started to explain what was going on.
“John, the reason you are here….is because your not human….you’re a Sai-” gohan was cut off.
“NOT HUMAN YOU GUYS ARE CRAZY!” John said quickly.
“As I was saying, Your not human, You’re a Saiyan. One of the strongest beings in the world.” Gohan said looking at John.
“We have taken you to teach you how to release your Saiyan- Jin power to its fullest extent. Have you ever felt like you have Bardo’s powers off of SBU and Try and do a Two way beam?” Gohan said looking at him with question, “Well we call that a KA-Me-Ha-Me-Ha, Very powerful. Just like you…” Gohan said walking around to the front of him and looking him the eyes.
:I don’t understand, I’m suppose to be the strongest person in the universe?” John said
“Yes you are, you just don’t know it, that’s why you’re here….” Gohan said l looking at the ground.
He untied John and moved away, John got up slowly and started to say.
“So you guys aren’t here to kill me or kidnap me are you? Your really serious about this.” he said with a concerned expression.
He got up and started to walk around.
“Follow me. It is time to start….” Gohan said and walked out of the room…

CHAPTER 2 : Time of peace and sorrow…

“What is this place?” John asked with Suspicion walking around.
“This place, an old warehouse, that we fixed up.” He said leading the way.
“Will I be training here?” He looked around he heard some snickering from Gohan “What’s so funny?”
Ha! You train here……You need a planet for your abilities.” He said smirking. “Continue this way, were almost there.” As he picked up speed.
“I need a planet to train….there’s no way I’m that strong…am I?” He said looking bewildered.
“You will find out soon enough…” Gohan said, “Here we are, next room.”
“ Trunks! You Ready GO!?!” He yelled through out the open warehouse.
“Trunks, Gohan…where do you get these names from?” He asked jokingly.
“The machine isn’t functioning properly, it will take me about 30 minuets to fix.” Trunks yelled.
“Long story kid-” Gohan said
“We have 30 minuets, tell-away.” John said Sarcastically. Gohan sighed, “Mine as well.” he said in a depressed way. He sat on the ground and started to talk.
“About 200 years ago, I had a family, so did Trunks….while our families died of old age, Trunks and I stayed our young ages, me being 29 and him being 19...We had to watch our families die off one by one…Goku, My dad being the strongest of all the saiyans… died first, My mother Chi-Chi second, and my brother Goten last, of old age. We got these names by our fathers and mother, I was named after my grandfather, Grandpa Gohan. And Trunks…He’s another story. He would have to tell you.”
There was a long pause.. Then John answered.
“Ok let me get this straight your over 200 years old!?!” John said
“Yes, I am 232 ½ years old.” Gohan said with depression
“H-Ho-How did you get so old?” John said with sympathy.
“Along time ago I saved the world from a evil creature named Cell. During that time I reached Super Saiyan 2. My dad Goku collected balls with special abilities called Dragon balls. We used those to wish all the people who had been killed on that day back to life. Years later, we used them again, except this time, we weren’t using them, an evil prince was using them. He was wishing for immortality. We couldn’t let it happen. When we arrived he was already wishing upon the balls, I threw a beam at him, killing him, but it was to late. The wish was made, but luckily the wish didn’t respond fast enough to make him immortal, but instead passing the wish unto trunks and I.. Thus cursed forever to watch our families die out, and never have a family again.”
“That must have been hard…” John said looking at Gohan.
“It was very hard, especially for Trunks. He had one of the har-” Gohan was cut off.
“Its fixed.” Trunks yelled. Gohan got up and said, “ok, its time for you to learn the way of the Saiyan-Jin…” As Gohan went into the next room John stayed for a sec, and just thought of all the trouble Gohan had went through, and moved on silently.

Chapter 3: Impossible…
As they went into the other room, John started to wonder what they were doing.
“What exactly are we doing? Where are we going” he asked Gohan, but Gohan just kept walking into the room.
“Trunks! SET IT AND LETS GO! WE DON’T HAVE ALL DAY!” Gohan yelled th with a raising temper
“Coming just got to grab my Sword.” Trunks said running around.
“What are we doing? John asked again.
“This is a transporter, this whole entire room, It’s what trunks was work-” Gohan was brought to a halt. He stared of into the distance.
“What’s wrong?” John asked “What’s wron-”
“SHH! Be quiet…..Theres someone out there, besides Trunks, but there using a technique I’ve never felt before, I didn’t feel them at all until now…Very strong, it maybe them.. TRUNKS!!! LETS GO!! NOW, THERE HERE!! ERASE THE DATA LOG TO OUR DESTINATION!” Gohan yelled. It got very silent….Then out of the window a bright light came.
“WE HAVE TO GO!! THERE RIGHT OUTSIDE!!” Gohan Screamed. Outside he heard someone saying something, Trunks came running in the room, He went to the far end of the room and pressed a red button, at the same time John felt his body disintegrate, yet feel as if those parts were in another world. As the last pieces of John, Gohan and Trunks faded, John looked down, and when he looked up he saw this face, staring him in the eyes, then john faded into a whole new world….
“WHO THE HELL WAS THAT!?!” John said with fury and shock. He said as he went up to Gohan who had landed a few feet away with Trunks. Gohan didn’t answer though.. He just stared off into the distance like a crazed person. Trunks looked the same. He waved his hands in front of both of them.
“Hello!?!” John howled
Completely ignoring John, Gohan started to talk to Trunks.
“It couldn’t have been them” He said hysterically
“But it was, them I don’t know how but it was….What has happened….How could it be them?” Trunks said turning to Gohan.
“Who was it! Who was that Back THERE!?!” John yelled once more.
There was a long pause, and Goahn started to move.
“I-I-IT-IT was m-my father, Goku…And his father Vegeta….” Gohan whispered.



Chapter 4 - Pre-Training


Gohan looked as if he’d seen a ghost, Trunks was shocked even more. it got quiet.. Then Gohan’s color returned to his normal state and spoke up.
“No matter, You have to train, we must teach you….Trunks….Trunks!” Gohan shouted. Trunks was still in another world, “Trunks, Snap out of it, No matter the resemblance, It wasn’t them. We have to train John…He’s our last hope…He needs you….I need you.. Don’t quit o-” Gohan was cut off in the middle of his sentence.
“Gohan, Lets do it .Lets get those *******s. I now know it couldn’t have been them, My father was once evil, but not anymore, HOW DARE THEY TAKE THEIR BODIES!!!” Trunks shouted with rage standing up. “It is time John! Lets get started.” Trunks said turning around to a world of green grass and blue skies. “This planet, with its Green grass, no inhabitants, and at the edge of the Solar System : Orion’s belt ,it should be sufficient.” Trunks said brightly.
“We have less than 5 days to train.” Gohan said with a serious look.
“So….Were do we start?” John asked.
“We start by bringing out you.” Gohan said with a evil glare.
“Wha-Why you looking at me like that?” John said backing slowly away.
“ha ha ha ha….You’ll see”Gohan said smiling evilly.


Chapter 5 - It begins…

“Stop looking at me like that” John said backing up, moving across the grass.
“Stop moving, and come here…this will only hurt for a little while.” Gohan said.
“WHAT WILL ONLY HURT FOR A LITTLE WHILE!?!” John screamed, Gohan ran behind John in an instant and swung his arms around him, “Trunks come here and hold him.” Gohan said calmly. Trunks walked slowly over to john and held him from the front.
“Drop his pants trunks.” Gohan whispered
“Do what?!?!?!!” John shrieked
“Hurry up trunks.” Gohan said with a paced voice. Trunks reached one hand behind John and drop his pants halfway.
“Has your but been hurting a little bit lately john?” He asked.
“A lil, but what are you doing?” John asked. They continued to ignore him.
“Get by that tree over there, tie him up around it.” Gohan said demandingly. Trunks walked over to a tree only 7 feet away.
“John, grab on to the tree as tightly as you can, Trunks push from the back while I pull him awa-” Cut off in his sentence.
“What do you mean pull from the back while you push, What the hell are you doing!?!” John asked eagerly. Continuing to ignore him. They took there position and got ready to pull, and push.
“John, I’m serious, you might want to hold onto the tree pretty tight.” John said seriously, “On the count of 3 trunks….1.…..2.…..3!” Gohan yelled.
At a moments notice, John hurried and turned around towards the tree, and held on as tight as he could. Trunks was pushing hard against John while Gohan was pulling as hard as he could on a little bone near John’s but. At first it felt to John as if he was being compressed against a hard branchy surface, mere seconds later he felt like being pulled away into a black hole.
“IT HURTS” John screamed
“Just hold on John, Were Almost THERE!” Gohan said with a raising voice.
Gohan could feel himself falling back slightly each pull, ignoring John’s Painful screams, He repeated to pull.
John was holding on tight, more than Gohan had expected. The tree John was holding onto, was starting to crumble underneath John’s grip. The bark started to break apart in his hand, John’s hands started to retract into a fist. Gohan was still pulling, a tail had been formed out of what was there.
“STOP IT-T-TT!” John yelled.
In an instant, the tree disintegrated, forcing trunks to let go, and sending Gohan flying backwards….

After a few seconds of silence, Gohan looked up at john, and saw what he could not believe…

Chapter 6 - From the beginning.


“Full Throttle Captain Gene”
“Yes Sire, King Vegeta”
“John….JOHN! Wake up, John wake up- I think he’s coming around Trunks.” whispered a faint voice. John’s eyes slowly started to open, gradually starting to move. Gohan interrupted.
“Don’t move, you’ve been through a lot especially for you being half human. Anyways, we were very close, but we have to continue pulling your tail o-” he was disconnected with the sound of John in a dazed voice.
“Wh-Wha-What happened?” John said tiredly, “I was having a peculiar dream…some-something about a guy named….King Vegeta.” Johns eyes opened widely, “King vegeta, you said Trunks father was named Vegeta right? King Vegeta, was that Trunk’s Father?”
“We don’t have time for this, we have to continue train-” Gohan was brought to a halt. He looked up from John to Trunks, who was standing there, who looked like he was about to speak.
“No, that was Vegeta’s, My farther’s, farther. King Vegeta, Ruler of all Saiyans. Killed later in the Frieza attack, Don’t ask, Before that he conquered hundreds of planets with his loyal engineers with him. If you ask me I think he deserved to die, killing thousands reaching into the million margin.” Trunks said with a disgusted look upon his face, “Yes, Gohan is right we must continue.” Trunks thought walking away..
Chapter 7-Training……World End?

Gohan started to get up and walk away when he stopped in his tracks.
“NO! NOT YET!!!”
“What is it Gohan, What’s wrong!?!” Trunks and John said together.
Standing a little way out was Gohan, not moving an inch with a scared look lying on his face
“What’s wrong Gohan?” Trunks asked getting closer, then he too stopped.
“Oh my God! Trunks said with rage “NO! IT CAN’T BE, I THOUGHT WE HAD MORE TIME.” He said looking sad.
“What’s going on? John requested calmly
There was complete silence, besides the sound of violent wind swaying in the background. Gohan dropped to his knees looking at the ground and started to grip the ground. Moments later he got up and looked at John, Raising the hand with dirt he clenched his fist, some sort of yellow mist formed from the bed of his feet, immediately flowing to the top of his head. There stood a being of unbelievable power felt for miles around. John stepped backwards in disbelief of what he was seeing. Still looking at John he started to talk.
“Trunks, They have destroyed our home, We will kill them….NO MERCY!!!!AHHH!!!”
“Wh-Whose home? Earth!?! What are you talking abo-”
“Earth is gone John….we’re all that is left, the Universe’s last hope.” Trunks spoke up.
“No, NO, That’s impossible” He said with a elevating voice. ”YOUR LYING” Gohan started to mumble-
“it’s-it’s all gone. Everything. Even your mother-”
“Mum….NOOOOO!!”
“WHAT’S GOING ON GOHAN?” Trunks Asked quickly.
The whole planet was shaking, giant rocks were lifting out of the ground. Then Gohan stopped yelling, Gohan and Trunks looked at John.
“TAKE MY MOTHER WILL THEY!!!! AHHHHHHH!!” John Screamed.
Just as with Gohan, Yellow Mist was forming at the bottom of John and swirling to the top of his skull.
“AHHHHHH!!!! LET THE TRAINING BEGIN!” In a flash he charged at Gohan.
“Then let us-” Dodging John’s fist “BEGIN!” Gohan flew fast upwards, came to a halt, with John only a few hundred feet away he started to yell-
“KA-ME-HA-ME-” In an Instant John appeared behind Gohan and knocked Gohan in the back of the head with his elbow, Sending Gohan Flying into the Planet. “HAAAAHHHHH! AH AH AH AH AH AH AH AH AH AH!” Gohan Screamed Releasing dozens of Ki beams at John. “IS THAT ALL YOU’VE GOT!” John screamed Dodging the beams.
With the flick of Gohan‘s Wrist pulling the beams back at John, Hitting John in the back “KA-ME-HA-ME-HA!!!” Gohan Screamed Firing His Special Beam at John Hitting John from the front. Forcing him upwards. “NO, IVE ONLY BEGUN!” He screamed Rushing upwards at John.

Chapter 8- Super Saiyan 2?? 3??
 
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