New Member
- Joined
- Apr 16, 2003
- Messages
- 315
- Best answers
- 0
Ok, im thinking bout making this John..but when the magna starts the detail of the story and drawing will be better.http://www.freewebs.com/esoldiers/websalbum.htm his legs are kinda messed up but mostly what im going for is his face. The wind isblowing on him but i didnt add the wind :scared: ... Chapter 4 will be out when i can.
New Member
- Joined
- Apr 16, 2003
- Messages
- 315
- Best answers
- 0
its a surprise 
lol if it turns out good ill tell you, also ive decided that 1 Chapter Will be released every Weekend, so all you have to wait till the weekend to read chapter 4 - this allows me to gointo full detail (i hope it comes out good ) neways Chapter 4 will be out this weekend friday or sat
lol if it turns out good ill tell you, also ive decided that 1 Chapter Will be released every Weekend, so all you have to wait till the weekend to read chapter 4 - this allows me to gointo full detail (i hope it comes out good ) neways Chapter 4 will be out this weekend friday or sat
New Member
- Joined
- Apr 16, 2003
- Messages
- 315
- Best answers
- 0
Since 4 is so short, ill have 5 by this weekend
Sorry the last entry being so short, so isthis one but lately i havnt had much time to wirte with school and my work on the site of DBA. My apologies.
Three Surviving Super Saiyans
Written by: Tank
John Schmahl, AKA Fever, a normal 16 year old boy. Every morning he did he normal schedule, get up at 6:00 A.M., get ready for school, come home, do his chores, get on computer. His life needed change. Every since he had become involved in the Anime âSBUâ (Strongest Beings in the Universe) He has been obsessed with the feeling of becoming the strongest. He believes that becoming a Super Being is Possible. He believed he was âThe One.â One day, his life changedâ¦..
Chapter 1: Abduction.
âMom, ill see you later, going to school!â John said with a loud voice
He went out of his two story house and started to walk down his driveway, by the time he got to his driveway he stopped.
âWhat was that?â he said with suspicion âThat was weirdâ¦.I swear I could feel some-â
In a blink of an eye, he was gone.. No one saw it, but what had happened?
âWh-Wh-Wher-Where am I?â he said with a dazed look
He noticed he was tied to a chair, and couldnât move. He was in a dark room with a spotlight on him, lighting the only part of the room. Out of the dark came a voice.
âYou are what you think you are, you just donât know how to set free your aptitude.â
âWho are you? WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME!?! If its moneyâ¦weâre bro-â
âItâs not money. We want just you, and you only. You have a purposeâ The man said, slowly walking around the room. âYour Destiny, We-â he was cut off by a loud screech.
âWE? Thereâs more of you?â John said with a scared glare.
âYes, We.. We took you because you are our only hope, The worldâs only hopeâ¦â he stepped forward into the light.
âWhat do you meanâ¦Iâm the worldâs only hope?â he said looking in his eyes
âIn due time, you will know everything you will need to know. But until that time, you will remain clueless.â he said stepping backwards out of the light. John heard a door open and shut. He remained silentâ¦.until he heard voices outside the door.
âWe have to tell him now, we cant waist anymore time Gohan! You have to tell him, weâre going to need all the time we can get and you know this.â He said with a whispered voice.
âTELL ME WHAT!?!â John said yelling at the door. At the same time they walked in. They started walking around the room, until they came to johnâs back side.
âWe are going to let you go, not out of this room, but untie you.â Gohan said as he reached for the chain that strapped him down. At the same time, he started to explain what was going on.
âJohn, the reason you are hereâ¦.is because your not humanâ¦.youâre a Sai-â gohan was cut off.
âNOT HUMAN YOU GUYS ARE CRAZY!â John said quickly.
âAs I was saying, Your not human, Youâre a Saiyan. One of the strongest beings in the world.â Gohan said looking at John.
âWe have taken you to teach you how to release your Saiyan- Jin power to its fullest extent. Have you ever felt like you have Bardoâs powers off of SBU and Try and do a Two way beam?â Gohan said looking at him with question, âWell we call that a KA-Me-Ha-Me-Ha, Very powerful. Just like youâ¦â Gohan said walking around to the front of him and looking him the eyes.
:I donât understand, Iâm suppose to be the strongest person in the universe?â John said
âYes you are, you just donât know it, thatâs why youâre hereâ¦.â Gohan said l looking at the ground.
He untied John and moved away, John got up slowly and started to say.
âSo you guys arenât here to kill me or kidnap me are you? Your really serious about this.â he said with a concerned expression.
He got up and started to walk around.
âFollow me. It is time to startâ¦.â Gohan said and walked out of the roomâ¦
CHAPTER 2 : Time of peace and sorrowâ¦
âWhat is this place?â John asked with Suspicion walking around.
âThis place, an old warehouse, that we fixed up.â He said leading the way.
âWill I be training here?â He looked around he heard some snickering from Gohan âWhatâs so funny?â
Ha! You train hereâ¦â¦You need a planet for your abilities.â He said smirking. âContinue this way, were almost there.â As he picked up speed.
âI need a planet to trainâ¦.thereâs no way Iâm that strongâ¦am I?â He said looking bewildered.
âYou will find out soon enoughâ¦â Gohan said, âHere we are, next room.â
â Trunks! You Ready GO!?!â He yelled through out the open warehouse.
âTrunks, Gohanâ¦where do you get these names from?â He asked jokingly.
âThe machine isnât functioning properly, it will take me about 30 minuets to fix.â Trunks yelled.
âLong story kid-â Gohan said
âWe have 30 minuets, tell-away.â John said Sarcastically. Gohan sighed, âMine as well.â he said in a depressed way. He sat on the ground and started to talk.
âAbout 200 years ago, I had a family, so did Trunksâ¦.while our families died of old age, Trunks and I stayed our young ages, me being 29 and him being 19...We had to watch our families die off one by oneâ¦Goku, My dad being the strongest of all the saiyans⦠died first, My mother Chi-Chi second, and my brother Goten last, of old age. We got these names by our fathers and mother, I was named after my grandfather, Grandpa Gohan. And Trunksâ¦Heâs another story. He would have to tell you.â
There was a long pause.. Then John answered.
âOk let me get this straight your over 200 years old!?!â John said
âYes, I am 232 ½ years old.â John said with depression
âH-Ho-How did you get so old?â John said with sympathy.
âAlong time ago I saved the world from a evil creature named Cell. During that time I reached Super Saiyan 2. My dad Goku collected balls with special abilities called Dragon balls. We used those to wish all the people who had been killed on that day back to life. Years later, we used them again, except this time, we werenât using them, an evil prince was using them. He was wishing for immortality. We couldnât let it happen. When we arrived he was already wishing upon the balls, I threw a beam at him, killing him, but it was to late. The wish was made, but luckily the wish didnât respond fast enough to make him immortal, but instead passing the wish unto trunks and I.. Thus cursed forever to watch our families die out, and never have a family again.â
âThat must have been hardâ¦â John said looking at Gohan.
âIt was very hard, especially for Trunks. He had one of the har-â Gohan was cut off.
âIts fixed.â Trunks yelled. Gohan got up and said, âok, its time for you to learn the way of the Saiyan-Jinâ¦â As Gohan went into the next room John stayed for a sec, and just thought of all the trouble Gohan had went through, and moved on silently.
Chapter 3: Impossibleâ¦
As they went into the other room, John started to wonder what they were doing.
âWhat exactly are we doing? Where are we goingâ he asked Gohan, but Gohan just kept walking into the room.
âTrunks! SET IT AND LETS GO! WE DONâT HAVE ALL DAY!â Gohan yelled th with a raising temper
âComing just got to grab my Sword.â Trunks said running around.
âWhat are we doing? John asked again.
âThis is a transporter, this whole entire room, Itâs what trunks was work-â Gohan was brought to a halt. He stared of into the distance.
âWhatâs wrong?â John asked âWhatâs wron-â
âSHH! Be quietâ¦..Theres someone out there, besides Trunks, but there using a technique Iâve never felt before, I didnât feel them at all until nowâ¦Very strong, it maybe them.. TRUNKS!!! LETS GO!! NOW, THERE HERE!! ERASE THE DATA LOG TO OUR DESTINATION!â Gohan yelled. It got very silentâ¦.Then out of the window a bright light came.
âWE HAVE TO GO!! THERE RIGHT OUTSIDE!!â Gohan Screamed. Outside he heard someone saying something, Trunks came running in the room, He went to the far end of the room and pressed a red button, at the same time John felt his body disintegrate, yet feel as if those parts were in another world. As the last pieces of John, Gohan and Trunks faded, John looked down, and when he looked up he saw this face, staring him in the eyes, then john faded into a whole new worldâ¦.
âWHO THE HELL WAS THAT!?!â John said with fury and shock. He said as he went up to Gohan who had landed a few feet away with Trunks. Gohan didnât answer though.. He just stared off into the distance like a crazed person. Trunks looked the same. He waved his hands in front of both of them.
âHello!?!â John howled
Completely ignoring John, Gohan started to talk to Trunks.
âIt couldnât have been themâ He said hysterically
âBut it was, them I donât know how but it wasâ¦.What has happenedâ¦.How could it be them?â Trunks said turning to Gohan.
âWho was it! Who was that Back THERE!?!â John yelled once more.
There was a long pause, and Goahn started to move.
âI-I-IT-IT was m-my father, Gokuâ¦And his father Vegetaâ¦.â Gohan whispered.
Chapter 4 - Pre-Training
Gohan looked as if heâd seen a ghost, Trunks was shocked even more. it got quiet.. Then Gohanâs color returned to his normal state and spoke up.
âNo matter, You have to train, we must teach youâ¦.Trunksâ¦.Trunks!â Gohan shouted. Trunks was still in another world, âTrunks, Snap out of it, No mater the resemblance, It wasnât them. We have to train Johnâ¦Heâs our last hopeâ¦He needs youâ¦.I need you.. Donât quit o-â Gohan was cut off in the middle of his sentence.
âGohan, Lets do it .Lets get those bas tards. I know it couldnât have been them, My father was once evil, but not anymore, HOW DARE THEY TAKE THEIR BODIES!!!â Trunks shouted with rage standing up. âIt is time John! Lets get started.â Trunks said turning around to a world of green grass and blue skies. âThis planet, with its Green grass, no inhabitants, and at the edge of the Solar System : Orionâs belt ,it should be sufficient.â Trunks said brightly.
âWe have less than 5 days to train.â Gohan said with a serious look.
âSoâ¦.Were do we start?â John asked.
âWe start by bringing out you.â Gohan said with a evil glare.
âWha-Why you looking at me like that?â John said backing slowly away.
âha ha ha haâ¦.Youâll seeâGohan said smiling evilly.
Chapter - 5 It begins...
Sorry the last entry being so short, so isthis one but lately i havnt had much time to wirte with school and my work on the site of DBA. My apologies.
Three Surviving Super Saiyans
Written by: Tank
John Schmahl, AKA Fever, a normal 16 year old boy. Every morning he did he normal schedule, get up at 6:00 A.M., get ready for school, come home, do his chores, get on computer. His life needed change. Every since he had become involved in the Anime âSBUâ (Strongest Beings in the Universe) He has been obsessed with the feeling of becoming the strongest. He believes that becoming a Super Being is Possible. He believed he was âThe One.â One day, his life changedâ¦..
Chapter 1: Abduction.
âMom, ill see you later, going to school!â John said with a loud voice
He went out of his two story house and started to walk down his driveway, by the time he got to his driveway he stopped.
âWhat was that?â he said with suspicion âThat was weirdâ¦.I swear I could feel some-â
In a blink of an eye, he was gone.. No one saw it, but what had happened?
âWh-Wh-Wher-Where am I?â he said with a dazed look
He noticed he was tied to a chair, and couldnât move. He was in a dark room with a spotlight on him, lighting the only part of the room. Out of the dark came a voice.
âYou are what you think you are, you just donât know how to set free your aptitude.â
âWho are you? WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME!?! If its moneyâ¦weâre bro-â
âItâs not money. We want just you, and you only. You have a purposeâ The man said, slowly walking around the room. âYour Destiny, We-â he was cut off by a loud screech.
âWE? Thereâs more of you?â John said with a scared glare.
âYes, We.. We took you because you are our only hope, The worldâs only hopeâ¦â he stepped forward into the light.
âWhat do you meanâ¦Iâm the worldâs only hope?â he said looking in his eyes
âIn due time, you will know everything you will need to know. But until that time, you will remain clueless.â he said stepping backwards out of the light. John heard a door open and shut. He remained silentâ¦.until he heard voices outside the door.
âWe have to tell him now, we cant waist anymore time Gohan! You have to tell him, weâre going to need all the time we can get and you know this.â He said with a whispered voice.
âTELL ME WHAT!?!â John said yelling at the door. At the same time they walked in. They started walking around the room, until they came to johnâs back side.
âWe are going to let you go, not out of this room, but untie you.â Gohan said as he reached for the chain that strapped him down. At the same time, he started to explain what was going on.
âJohn, the reason you are hereâ¦.is because your not humanâ¦.youâre a Sai-â gohan was cut off.
âNOT HUMAN YOU GUYS ARE CRAZY!â John said quickly.
âAs I was saying, Your not human, Youâre a Saiyan. One of the strongest beings in the world.â Gohan said looking at John.
âWe have taken you to teach you how to release your Saiyan- Jin power to its fullest extent. Have you ever felt like you have Bardoâs powers off of SBU and Try and do a Two way beam?â Gohan said looking at him with question, âWell we call that a KA-Me-Ha-Me-Ha, Very powerful. Just like youâ¦â Gohan said walking around to the front of him and looking him the eyes.
:I donât understand, Iâm suppose to be the strongest person in the universe?â John said
âYes you are, you just donât know it, thatâs why youâre hereâ¦.â Gohan said l looking at the ground.
He untied John and moved away, John got up slowly and started to say.
âSo you guys arenât here to kill me or kidnap me are you? Your really serious about this.â he said with a concerned expression.
He got up and started to walk around.
âFollow me. It is time to startâ¦.â Gohan said and walked out of the roomâ¦
CHAPTER 2 : Time of peace and sorrowâ¦
âWhat is this place?â John asked with Suspicion walking around.
âThis place, an old warehouse, that we fixed up.â He said leading the way.
âWill I be training here?â He looked around he heard some snickering from Gohan âWhatâs so funny?â
Ha! You train hereâ¦â¦You need a planet for your abilities.â He said smirking. âContinue this way, were almost there.â As he picked up speed.
âI need a planet to trainâ¦.thereâs no way Iâm that strongâ¦am I?â He said looking bewildered.
âYou will find out soon enoughâ¦â Gohan said, âHere we are, next room.â
â Trunks! You Ready GO!?!â He yelled through out the open warehouse.
âTrunks, Gohanâ¦where do you get these names from?â He asked jokingly.
âThe machine isnât functioning properly, it will take me about 30 minuets to fix.â Trunks yelled.
âLong story kid-â Gohan said
âWe have 30 minuets, tell-away.â John said Sarcastically. Gohan sighed, âMine as well.â he said in a depressed way. He sat on the ground and started to talk.
âAbout 200 years ago, I had a family, so did Trunksâ¦.while our families died of old age, Trunks and I stayed our young ages, me being 29 and him being 19...We had to watch our families die off one by oneâ¦Goku, My dad being the strongest of all the saiyans⦠died first, My mother Chi-Chi second, and my brother Goten last, of old age. We got these names by our fathers and mother, I was named after my grandfather, Grandpa Gohan. And Trunksâ¦Heâs another story. He would have to tell you.â
There was a long pause.. Then John answered.
âOk let me get this straight your over 200 years old!?!â John said
âYes, I am 232 ½ years old.â John said with depression
âH-Ho-How did you get so old?â John said with sympathy.
âAlong time ago I saved the world from a evil creature named Cell. During that time I reached Super Saiyan 2. My dad Goku collected balls with special abilities called Dragon balls. We used those to wish all the people who had been killed on that day back to life. Years later, we used them again, except this time, we werenât using them, an evil prince was using them. He was wishing for immortality. We couldnât let it happen. When we arrived he was already wishing upon the balls, I threw a beam at him, killing him, but it was to late. The wish was made, but luckily the wish didnât respond fast enough to make him immortal, but instead passing the wish unto trunks and I.. Thus cursed forever to watch our families die out, and never have a family again.â
âThat must have been hardâ¦â John said looking at Gohan.
âIt was very hard, especially for Trunks. He had one of the har-â Gohan was cut off.
âIts fixed.â Trunks yelled. Gohan got up and said, âok, its time for you to learn the way of the Saiyan-Jinâ¦â As Gohan went into the next room John stayed for a sec, and just thought of all the trouble Gohan had went through, and moved on silently.
Chapter 3: Impossibleâ¦
As they went into the other room, John started to wonder what they were doing.
âWhat exactly are we doing? Where are we goingâ he asked Gohan, but Gohan just kept walking into the room.
âTrunks! SET IT AND LETS GO! WE DONâT HAVE ALL DAY!â Gohan yelled th with a raising temper
âComing just got to grab my Sword.â Trunks said running around.
âWhat are we doing? John asked again.
âThis is a transporter, this whole entire room, Itâs what trunks was work-â Gohan was brought to a halt. He stared of into the distance.
âWhatâs wrong?â John asked âWhatâs wron-â
âSHH! Be quietâ¦..Theres someone out there, besides Trunks, but there using a technique Iâve never felt before, I didnât feel them at all until nowâ¦Very strong, it maybe them.. TRUNKS!!! LETS GO!! NOW, THERE HERE!! ERASE THE DATA LOG TO OUR DESTINATION!â Gohan yelled. It got very silentâ¦.Then out of the window a bright light came.
âWE HAVE TO GO!! THERE RIGHT OUTSIDE!!â Gohan Screamed. Outside he heard someone saying something, Trunks came running in the room, He went to the far end of the room and pressed a red button, at the same time John felt his body disintegrate, yet feel as if those parts were in another world. As the last pieces of John, Gohan and Trunks faded, John looked down, and when he looked up he saw this face, staring him in the eyes, then john faded into a whole new worldâ¦.
âWHO THE HELL WAS THAT!?!â John said with fury and shock. He said as he went up to Gohan who had landed a few feet away with Trunks. Gohan didnât answer though.. He just stared off into the distance like a crazed person. Trunks looked the same. He waved his hands in front of both of them.
âHello!?!â John howled
Completely ignoring John, Gohan started to talk to Trunks.
âIt couldnât have been themâ He said hysterically
âBut it was, them I donât know how but it wasâ¦.What has happenedâ¦.How could it be them?â Trunks said turning to Gohan.
âWho was it! Who was that Back THERE!?!â John yelled once more.
There was a long pause, and Goahn started to move.
âI-I-IT-IT was m-my father, Gokuâ¦And his father Vegetaâ¦.â Gohan whispered.
Chapter 4 - Pre-Training
Gohan looked as if heâd seen a ghost, Trunks was shocked even more. it got quiet.. Then Gohanâs color returned to his normal state and spoke up.
âNo matter, You have to train, we must teach youâ¦.Trunksâ¦.Trunks!â Gohan shouted. Trunks was still in another world, âTrunks, Snap out of it, No mater the resemblance, It wasnât them. We have to train Johnâ¦Heâs our last hopeâ¦He needs youâ¦.I need you.. Donât quit o-â Gohan was cut off in the middle of his sentence.
âGohan, Lets do it .Lets get those bas tards. I know it couldnât have been them, My father was once evil, but not anymore, HOW DARE THEY TAKE THEIR BODIES!!!â Trunks shouted with rage standing up. âIt is time John! Lets get started.â Trunks said turning around to a world of green grass and blue skies. âThis planet, with its Green grass, no inhabitants, and at the edge of the Solar System : Orionâs belt ,it should be sufficient.â Trunks said brightly.
âWe have less than 5 days to train.â Gohan said with a serious look.
âSoâ¦.Were do we start?â John asked.
âWe start by bringing out you.â Gohan said with a evil glare.
âWha-Why you looking at me like that?â John said backing slowly away.
âha ha ha haâ¦.Youâll seeâGohan said smiling evilly.
Chapter - 5 It begins...
New Member
- Joined
- Apr 16, 2003
- Messages
- 315
- Best answers
- 0
Heres 5 to make up for 4 being so short. Please comment about it, plus can neone tell me what Gohan saw??..(at the end of chapt 5) *SORRY FOR THE TRIPLE POST*
Three Surviving Super Saiyans
Written by: Tank
John Schmahl, AKA Fever, a normal 16 year old boy. Every morning he did he normal schedule, get up at 6:00 A.M., get ready for school, come home, do his chores, get on computer. His life needed change. Every since he had become involved in the Anime âSBUâ (Strongest Beings in the Universe) He has been obsessed with the feeling of becoming the strongest. He believes that becoming a Super Being is Possible. He believed he was âThe One.â One day, his life changedâ¦..
Chapter 1: Abduction.
âMom, ill see you later, going to school!â John said with a loud voice
He went out of his two story house and started to walk down his driveway, by the time he got to his driveway he stopped.
âWhat was that?â he said with suspicion âThat was weirdâ¦.I swear I could feel some-â
In a blink of an eye, he was gone.. No one saw it, but what had happened?
âWh-Wh-Wher-Where am I?â he said with a dazed look
He noticed he was tied to a chair, and couldnât move. He was in a dark room with a spotlight on him, lighting the only part of the room. Out of the dark came a voice.
âYou are what you think you are, you just donât know how to set free your aptitude.â
âWho are you? WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME!?! If its moneyâ¦weâre bro-â
âItâs not money. We want just you, and you only. You have a purposeâ The man said, slowly walking around the room. âYour Destiny, We-â he was cut off by a loud screech.
âWE? Thereâs more of you?â John said with a scared glare.
âYes, We.. We took you because you are our only hope, The worldâs only hopeâ¦â he stepped forward into the light.
âWhat do you meanâ¦Iâm the worldâs only hope?â he said looking in his eyes
âIn due time, you will know everything you will need to know. But until that time, you will remain clueless.â he said stepping backwards out of the light. John heard a door open and shut. He remained silentâ¦.until he heard voices outside the door.
âWe have to tell him now, we cant waist anymore time Gohan! You have to tell him, weâre going to need all the time we can get and you know this.â He said with a whispered voice.
âTELL ME WHAT!?!â John said yelling at the door. At the same time they walked in. They started walking around the room, until they came to johnâs back side.
âWe are going to let you go, not out of this room, but untie you.â Gohan said as he reached for the chain that strapped him down. At the same time, he started to explain what was going on.
âJohn, the reason you are hereâ¦.is because your not humanâ¦.youâre a Sai-â gohan was cut off.
âNOT HUMAN YOU GUYS ARE CRAZY!â John said quickly.
âAs I was saying, Your not human, Youâre a Saiyan. One of the strongest beings in the world.â Gohan said looking at John.
âWe have taken you to teach you how to release your Saiyan- Jin power to its fullest extent. Have you ever felt like you have Bardoâs powers off of SBU and Try and do a Two way beam?â Gohan said looking at him with question, âWell we call that a KA-Me-Ha-Me-Ha, Very powerful. Just like youâ¦â Gohan said walking around to the front of him and looking him the eyes.
:I donât understand, Iâm suppose to be the strongest person in the universe?â John said
âYes you are, you just donât know it, thatâs why youâre hereâ¦.â Gohan said l looking at the ground.
He untied John and moved away, John got up slowly and started to say.
âSo you guys arenât here to kill me or kidnap me are you? Your really serious about this.â he said with a concerned expression.
He got up and started to walk around.
âFollow me. It is time to startâ¦.â Gohan said and walked out of the roomâ¦
CHAPTER 2 : Time of peace and sorrowâ¦
âWhat is this place?â John asked with Suspicion walking around.
âThis place, an old warehouse, that we fixed up.â He said leading the way.
âWill I be training here?â He looked around he heard some snickering from Gohan âWhatâs so funny?â
Ha! You train hereâ¦â¦You need a planet for your abilities.â He said smirking. âContinue this way, were almost there.â As he picked up speed.
âI need a planet to trainâ¦.thereâs no way Iâm that strongâ¦am I?â He said looking bewildered.
âYou will find out soon enoughâ¦â Gohan said, âHere we are, next room.â
â Trunks! You Ready GO!?!â He yelled through out the open warehouse.
âTrunks, Gohanâ¦where do you get these names from?â He asked jokingly.
âThe machine isnât functioning properly, it will take me about 30 minuets to fix.â Trunks yelled.
âLong story kid-â Gohan said
âWe have 30 minuets, tell-away.â John said Sarcastically. Gohan sighed, âMine as well.â he said in a depressed way. He sat on the ground and started to talk.
âAbout 200 years ago, I had a family, so did Trunksâ¦.while our families died of old age, Trunks and I stayed our young ages, me being 29 and him being 19...We had to watch our families die off one by oneâ¦Goku, My dad being the strongest of all the saiyans⦠died first, My mother Chi-Chi second, and my brother Goten last, of old age. We got these names by our fathers and mother, I was named after my grandfather, Grandpa Gohan. And Trunksâ¦Heâs another story. He would have to tell you.â
There was a long pause.. Then John answered.
âOk let me get this straight your over 200 years old!?!â John said
âYes, I am 232 ½ years old.â John said with depression
âH-Ho-How did you get so old?â John said with sympathy.
âAlong time ago I saved the world from a evil creature named Cell. During that time I reached Super Saiyan 2. My dad Goku collected balls with special abilities called Dragon balls. We used those to wish all the people who had been killed on that day back to life. Years later, we used them again, except this time, we werenât using them, an evil prince was using them. He was wishing for immortality. We couldnât let it happen. When we arrived he was already wishing upon the balls, I threw a beam at him, killing him, but it was to late. The wish was made, but luckily the wish didnât respond fast enough to make him immortal, but instead passing the wish unto trunks and I.. Thus cursed forever to watch our families die out, and never have a family again.â
âThat must have been hardâ¦â John said looking at Gohan.
âIt was very hard, especially for Trunks. He had one of the har-â Gohan was cut off.
âIts fixed.â Trunks yelled. Gohan got up and said, âok, its time for you to learn the way of the Saiyan-Jinâ¦â As Gohan went into the next room John stayed for a sec, and just thought of all the trouble Gohan had went through, and moved on silently.
Chapter 3: Impossibleâ¦
As they went into the other room, John started to wonder what they were doing.
âWhat exactly are we doing? Where are we goingâ he asked Gohan, but Gohan just kept walking into the room.
âTrunks! SET IT AND LETS GO! WE DONâT HAVE ALL DAY!â Gohan yelled th with a raising temper
âComing just got to grab my Sword.â Trunks said running around.
âWhat are we doing? John asked again.
âThis is a transporter, this whole entire room, Itâs what trunks was work-â Gohan was brought to a halt. He stared of into the distance.
âWhatâs wrong?â John asked âWhatâs wron-â
âSHH! Be quietâ¦..Theres someone out there, besides Trunks, but there using a technique Iâve never felt before, I didnât feel them at all until nowâ¦Very strong, it maybe them.. TRUNKS!!! LETS GO!! NOW, THERE HERE!! ERASE THE DATA LOG TO OUR DESTINATION!â Gohan yelled. It got very silentâ¦.Then out of the window a bright light came.
âWE HAVE TO GO!! THERE RIGHT OUTSIDE!!â Gohan Screamed. Outside he heard someone saying something, Trunks came running in the room, He went to the far end of the room and pressed a red button, at the same time John felt his body disintegrate, yet feel as if those parts were in another world. As the last pieces of John, Gohan and Trunks faded, John looked down, and when he looked up he saw this face, staring him in the eyes, then john faded into a whole new worldâ¦.
âWHO THE HELL WAS THAT!?!â John said with fury and shock. He said as he went up to Gohan who had landed a few feet away with Trunks. Gohan didnât answer though.. He just stared off into the distance like a crazed person. Trunks looked the same. He waved his hands in front of both of them.
âHello!?!â John howled
Completely ignoring John, Gohan started to talk to Trunks.
âIt couldnât have been themâ He said hysterically
âBut it was, them I donât know how but it wasâ¦.What has happenedâ¦.How could it be them?â Trunks said turning to Gohan.
âWho was it! Who was that Back THERE!?!â John yelled once more.
There was a long pause, and Goahn started to move.
âI-I-IT-IT was m-my father, Gokuâ¦And his father Vegetaâ¦.â Gohan whispered.
Chapter 4 - Pre-Training
Gohan looked as if heâd seen a ghost, Trunks was shocked even more. it got quiet.. Then Gohanâs color returned to his normal state and spoke up.
âNo matter, You have to train, we must teach youâ¦.Trunksâ¦.Trunks!â Gohan shouted. Trunks was still in another world, âTrunks, Snap out of it, No mater the resemblance, It wasnât them. We have to train Johnâ¦Heâs our last hopeâ¦He needs youâ¦.I need you.. Donât quit o-â Gohan was cut off in the middle of his sentence.
âGohan, Lets do it .Lets get those *******s. I now know it couldnât have been them, My father was once evil, but not anymore, HOW DARE THEY TAKE THEIR BODIES!!!â Trunks shouted with rage standing up. âIt is time John! Lets get started.â Trunks said turning around to a world of green grass and blue skies. âThis planet, with its Green grass, no inhabitants, and at the edge of the Solar System : Orionâs belt ,it should be sufficient.â Trunks said brightly.
âWe have less than 5 days to train.â Gohan said with a serious look.
âSoâ¦.Were do we start?â John asked.
âWe start by bringing out you.â Gohan said with a evil glare.
âWha-Why you looking at me like that?â John said backing slowly away.
âha ha ha haâ¦.Youâll seeâGohan said smiling evilly.
Chapter 5 - It beginsâ¦
âStop looking at me like thatâ John said backing up, moving across the grass.
âStop moving, and come hereâ¦this will only hurt for a little while.â Gohan said.
âWHAT WILL ONLY HURT FOR A LITTLE WHILE!?!â John screamed, Gohan ran behind John in an instant and swung his arms around him, âTrunks come here and hold him.â Gohan said calmly. Trunks walked slowly over to john and held him from the front.
âDrop his pants trunks.â Gohan whispered
âDo what?!?!?!!â John shrieked
âHurry up trunks.â Gohan said with a paced voice. Trunks reached one hand behind John and drop his pants halfway.
âHas your but been hurting a little bit lately john?â He asked.
âA lil, but what are you doing?â John asked. They continued to ignore him.
âGet by that tree over there, tie him up around it.â Gohan said demandingly. Trunks walked over to a tree only 7 feet away.
âJohn, grab on to the tree as tightly as you can, Trunks push from the back while I pull him awa-â Cut off in his sentence.
âWhat do you mean pull from the back while you push, What the hell are you doing!?!â John asked eagerly. Continuing to ignore him. They took there position and got ready to pull, and push.
âJohn, Iâm serious, you might want to hold onto the tree pretty tight.â John said seriously, âOn the count of 3 trunksâ¦.1.â¦..2.â¦..3!â Gohan yelled.
At a moments notice, John hurried and turned around towards the tree, and held on as tight as he could. Trunks was pushing hard against John while Gohan was pulling as hard as he could on a little bone near Johnâs but. At first it felt to John as if he was being compressed against a hard branchy surface, mere seconds later he felt like being pulled away into a black hole.
âIT HURTSâ John screamed
âJust hold on John, Were Almost THERE!â Gohan said with a raising voice.
Gohan could feel himself falling back slightly each pull, ignoring Johnâs Painful screams, He repeated to pull.
John was holding on tight, more than Gohan had expected. The tree John was holding onto, was starting to crumble underneath Johnâs grip. The bark started to break apart in his hand, Johnâs hands started to retract into a fist. Gohan was still pulling, a tail had been formed out of what was there.
âSTOP IT-T-TT!â John yelled.
In an instant, the tree disintegrated, forcing trunks to let go, and sending Gohan flying backwardsâ¦.
After a few seconds of silence, Gohan looked up at john, and saw what he could not believeâ¦
Chapter 6 - From the beginning.
*SORRY FOR THE TRIPLE POST*Three Surviving Super Saiyans
Written by: Tank
John Schmahl, AKA Fever, a normal 16 year old boy. Every morning he did he normal schedule, get up at 6:00 A.M., get ready for school, come home, do his chores, get on computer. His life needed change. Every since he had become involved in the Anime âSBUâ (Strongest Beings in the Universe) He has been obsessed with the feeling of becoming the strongest. He believes that becoming a Super Being is Possible. He believed he was âThe One.â One day, his life changedâ¦..
Chapter 1: Abduction.
âMom, ill see you later, going to school!â John said with a loud voice
He went out of his two story house and started to walk down his driveway, by the time he got to his driveway he stopped.
âWhat was that?â he said with suspicion âThat was weirdâ¦.I swear I could feel some-â
In a blink of an eye, he was gone.. No one saw it, but what had happened?
âWh-Wh-Wher-Where am I?â he said with a dazed look
He noticed he was tied to a chair, and couldnât move. He was in a dark room with a spotlight on him, lighting the only part of the room. Out of the dark came a voice.
âYou are what you think you are, you just donât know how to set free your aptitude.â
âWho are you? WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME!?! If its moneyâ¦weâre bro-â
âItâs not money. We want just you, and you only. You have a purposeâ The man said, slowly walking around the room. âYour Destiny, We-â he was cut off by a loud screech.
âWE? Thereâs more of you?â John said with a scared glare.
âYes, We.. We took you because you are our only hope, The worldâs only hopeâ¦â he stepped forward into the light.
âWhat do you meanâ¦Iâm the worldâs only hope?â he said looking in his eyes
âIn due time, you will know everything you will need to know. But until that time, you will remain clueless.â he said stepping backwards out of the light. John heard a door open and shut. He remained silentâ¦.until he heard voices outside the door.
âWe have to tell him now, we cant waist anymore time Gohan! You have to tell him, weâre going to need all the time we can get and you know this.â He said with a whispered voice.
âTELL ME WHAT!?!â John said yelling at the door. At the same time they walked in. They started walking around the room, until they came to johnâs back side.
âWe are going to let you go, not out of this room, but untie you.â Gohan said as he reached for the chain that strapped him down. At the same time, he started to explain what was going on.
âJohn, the reason you are hereâ¦.is because your not humanâ¦.youâre a Sai-â gohan was cut off.
âNOT HUMAN YOU GUYS ARE CRAZY!â John said quickly.
âAs I was saying, Your not human, Youâre a Saiyan. One of the strongest beings in the world.â Gohan said looking at John.
âWe have taken you to teach you how to release your Saiyan- Jin power to its fullest extent. Have you ever felt like you have Bardoâs powers off of SBU and Try and do a Two way beam?â Gohan said looking at him with question, âWell we call that a KA-Me-Ha-Me-Ha, Very powerful. Just like youâ¦â Gohan said walking around to the front of him and looking him the eyes.
:I donât understand, Iâm suppose to be the strongest person in the universe?â John said
âYes you are, you just donât know it, thatâs why youâre hereâ¦.â Gohan said l looking at the ground.
He untied John and moved away, John got up slowly and started to say.
âSo you guys arenât here to kill me or kidnap me are you? Your really serious about this.â he said with a concerned expression.
He got up and started to walk around.
âFollow me. It is time to startâ¦.â Gohan said and walked out of the roomâ¦
CHAPTER 2 : Time of peace and sorrowâ¦
âWhat is this place?â John asked with Suspicion walking around.
âThis place, an old warehouse, that we fixed up.â He said leading the way.
âWill I be training here?â He looked around he heard some snickering from Gohan âWhatâs so funny?â
Ha! You train hereâ¦â¦You need a planet for your abilities.â He said smirking. âContinue this way, were almost there.â As he picked up speed.
âI need a planet to trainâ¦.thereâs no way Iâm that strongâ¦am I?â He said looking bewildered.
âYou will find out soon enoughâ¦â Gohan said, âHere we are, next room.â
â Trunks! You Ready GO!?!â He yelled through out the open warehouse.
âTrunks, Gohanâ¦where do you get these names from?â He asked jokingly.
âThe machine isnât functioning properly, it will take me about 30 minuets to fix.â Trunks yelled.
âLong story kid-â Gohan said
âWe have 30 minuets, tell-away.â John said Sarcastically. Gohan sighed, âMine as well.â he said in a depressed way. He sat on the ground and started to talk.
âAbout 200 years ago, I had a family, so did Trunksâ¦.while our families died of old age, Trunks and I stayed our young ages, me being 29 and him being 19...We had to watch our families die off one by oneâ¦Goku, My dad being the strongest of all the saiyans⦠died first, My mother Chi-Chi second, and my brother Goten last, of old age. We got these names by our fathers and mother, I was named after my grandfather, Grandpa Gohan. And Trunksâ¦Heâs another story. He would have to tell you.â
There was a long pause.. Then John answered.
âOk let me get this straight your over 200 years old!?!â John said
âYes, I am 232 ½ years old.â John said with depression
âH-Ho-How did you get so old?â John said with sympathy.
âAlong time ago I saved the world from a evil creature named Cell. During that time I reached Super Saiyan 2. My dad Goku collected balls with special abilities called Dragon balls. We used those to wish all the people who had been killed on that day back to life. Years later, we used them again, except this time, we werenât using them, an evil prince was using them. He was wishing for immortality. We couldnât let it happen. When we arrived he was already wishing upon the balls, I threw a beam at him, killing him, but it was to late. The wish was made, but luckily the wish didnât respond fast enough to make him immortal, but instead passing the wish unto trunks and I.. Thus cursed forever to watch our families die out, and never have a family again.â
âThat must have been hardâ¦â John said looking at Gohan.
âIt was very hard, especially for Trunks. He had one of the har-â Gohan was cut off.
âIts fixed.â Trunks yelled. Gohan got up and said, âok, its time for you to learn the way of the Saiyan-Jinâ¦â As Gohan went into the next room John stayed for a sec, and just thought of all the trouble Gohan had went through, and moved on silently.
Chapter 3: Impossibleâ¦
As they went into the other room, John started to wonder what they were doing.
âWhat exactly are we doing? Where are we goingâ he asked Gohan, but Gohan just kept walking into the room.
âTrunks! SET IT AND LETS GO! WE DONâT HAVE ALL DAY!â Gohan yelled th with a raising temper
âComing just got to grab my Sword.â Trunks said running around.
âWhat are we doing? John asked again.
âThis is a transporter, this whole entire room, Itâs what trunks was work-â Gohan was brought to a halt. He stared of into the distance.
âWhatâs wrong?â John asked âWhatâs wron-â
âSHH! Be quietâ¦..Theres someone out there, besides Trunks, but there using a technique Iâve never felt before, I didnât feel them at all until nowâ¦Very strong, it maybe them.. TRUNKS!!! LETS GO!! NOW, THERE HERE!! ERASE THE DATA LOG TO OUR DESTINATION!â Gohan yelled. It got very silentâ¦.Then out of the window a bright light came.
âWE HAVE TO GO!! THERE RIGHT OUTSIDE!!â Gohan Screamed. Outside he heard someone saying something, Trunks came running in the room, He went to the far end of the room and pressed a red button, at the same time John felt his body disintegrate, yet feel as if those parts were in another world. As the last pieces of John, Gohan and Trunks faded, John looked down, and when he looked up he saw this face, staring him in the eyes, then john faded into a whole new worldâ¦.
âWHO THE HELL WAS THAT!?!â John said with fury and shock. He said as he went up to Gohan who had landed a few feet away with Trunks. Gohan didnât answer though.. He just stared off into the distance like a crazed person. Trunks looked the same. He waved his hands in front of both of them.
âHello!?!â John howled
Completely ignoring John, Gohan started to talk to Trunks.
âIt couldnât have been themâ He said hysterically
âBut it was, them I donât know how but it wasâ¦.What has happenedâ¦.How could it be them?â Trunks said turning to Gohan.
âWho was it! Who was that Back THERE!?!â John yelled once more.
There was a long pause, and Goahn started to move.
âI-I-IT-IT was m-my father, Gokuâ¦And his father Vegetaâ¦.â Gohan whispered.
Chapter 4 - Pre-Training
Gohan looked as if heâd seen a ghost, Trunks was shocked even more. it got quiet.. Then Gohanâs color returned to his normal state and spoke up.
âNo matter, You have to train, we must teach youâ¦.Trunksâ¦.Trunks!â Gohan shouted. Trunks was still in another world, âTrunks, Snap out of it, No mater the resemblance, It wasnât them. We have to train Johnâ¦Heâs our last hopeâ¦He needs youâ¦.I need you.. Donât quit o-â Gohan was cut off in the middle of his sentence.
âGohan, Lets do it .Lets get those *******s. I now know it couldnât have been them, My father was once evil, but not anymore, HOW DARE THEY TAKE THEIR BODIES!!!â Trunks shouted with rage standing up. âIt is time John! Lets get started.â Trunks said turning around to a world of green grass and blue skies. âThis planet, with its Green grass, no inhabitants, and at the edge of the Solar System : Orionâs belt ,it should be sufficient.â Trunks said brightly.
âWe have less than 5 days to train.â Gohan said with a serious look.
âSoâ¦.Were do we start?â John asked.
âWe start by bringing out you.â Gohan said with a evil glare.
âWha-Why you looking at me like that?â John said backing slowly away.
âha ha ha haâ¦.Youâll seeâGohan said smiling evilly.
Chapter 5 - It beginsâ¦
âStop looking at me like thatâ John said backing up, moving across the grass.
âStop moving, and come hereâ¦this will only hurt for a little while.â Gohan said.
âWHAT WILL ONLY HURT FOR A LITTLE WHILE!?!â John screamed, Gohan ran behind John in an instant and swung his arms around him, âTrunks come here and hold him.â Gohan said calmly. Trunks walked slowly over to john and held him from the front.
âDrop his pants trunks.â Gohan whispered
âDo what?!?!?!!â John shrieked
âHurry up trunks.â Gohan said with a paced voice. Trunks reached one hand behind John and drop his pants halfway.
âHas your but been hurting a little bit lately john?â He asked.
âA lil, but what are you doing?â John asked. They continued to ignore him.
âGet by that tree over there, tie him up around it.â Gohan said demandingly. Trunks walked over to a tree only 7 feet away.
âJohn, grab on to the tree as tightly as you can, Trunks push from the back while I pull him awa-â Cut off in his sentence.
âWhat do you mean pull from the back while you push, What the hell are you doing!?!â John asked eagerly. Continuing to ignore him. They took there position and got ready to pull, and push.
âJohn, Iâm serious, you might want to hold onto the tree pretty tight.â John said seriously, âOn the count of 3 trunksâ¦.1.â¦..2.â¦..3!â Gohan yelled.
At a moments notice, John hurried and turned around towards the tree, and held on as tight as he could. Trunks was pushing hard against John while Gohan was pulling as hard as he could on a little bone near Johnâs but. At first it felt to John as if he was being compressed against a hard branchy surface, mere seconds later he felt like being pulled away into a black hole.
âIT HURTSâ John screamed
âJust hold on John, Were Almost THERE!â Gohan said with a raising voice.
Gohan could feel himself falling back slightly each pull, ignoring Johnâs Painful screams, He repeated to pull.
John was holding on tight, more than Gohan had expected. The tree John was holding onto, was starting to crumble underneath Johnâs grip. The bark started to break apart in his hand, Johnâs hands started to retract into a fist. Gohan was still pulling, a tail had been formed out of what was there.
âSTOP IT-T-TT!â John yelled.
In an instant, the tree disintegrated, forcing trunks to let go, and sending Gohan flying backwardsâ¦.
After a few seconds of silence, Gohan looked up at john, and saw what he could not believeâ¦
Chapter 6 - From the beginning.
New Member
- Joined
- Apr 16, 2003
- Messages
- 315
- Best answers
- 0
...are you saying its good, or bad? why do you want to priont it?
EDIT* o i read wrong, iw as in a hurry i took it as It was bad, you do thuink its good right? but still why do you want to print it ? yes you have my permission. but please tell me why you want to
EDIT* o i read wrong, iw as in a hurry i took it as It was bad, you do thuink its good right? but still why do you want to print it ? yes you have my permission. but please tell me why you want to
