Exactly, Dask his own personal views on how you could improve the sig, while you have your own.
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Moving on, I guess I'll give my opinion on the sig, the one where you have the car and the tech brushes.
I don't really like the gray box in the middle, it either needs to have it's opacity lowered, or be removed completely. I can understand how you don't want the sig to feel empty, but this makes the sig too complex, and is an actual eye sore to the decent sig that is almost hiding behind it at this point. I like the font, and using the Audi logo to represent the rings, is a humerous thing. Another way you could incorporate some "substance" into the supposed "emptiness" as you call it, is to maybe take the pen tool and draw some flowing shapes all over the Audi, then smudging them all in one direction, so it gives the Audio a motion-like effect.
4/10