ZOMGOSH!!! so many gokus..whassup with that?!

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ok, its good... but...
He looks like a snoman in an orange jumpsuit...
like he is chubby and he is too rounded.. and what is w/ the folds at the bottom, they dont even make sense, he looks like he has a compound fracture.

I also noticed that the hairline seems to continue under his ears for way too long.
And the SSJ3 hair at the top looks really bad :( its way to short and reminds me of an overgrown mullet. Other than that, its great, the proportions (cept for the chubbyness) look good, i like how the boots are. :)

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I hate crit'ing someones work cause i hate when ppl crit mine, plus I cant model if my life depended on it, so i have to say that this model has definate potential, just fix it up alot. and if this is WIP, then ignore everything i have said
 
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sorry to be the one to tell you this dan16 but hes not gonna fix up anything on the goku because he no longer has any inspiration to do so
 
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the face from the 3/4 view is way to chibi looking like.. u've got to make the face like Straight edges not roundish... round is for kids.. straight is for adults
 
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i think the round effect/shape makes the render prog. (i mean how he render his self) um...I dont think that his head looks 3/4 chibi...i dont see it.. may u can do a draw over DBXMe² ?
 
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here is the drawover for the face.. dont pay any attention to the eyes or nething was just doing it to get a better feel for how the face should be.. in my opinion atleast.

here is a link to it http://www.deviantart.com/view/13478594/

my host is sorta down.. well half down
 

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