The Morning Sun

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Need crits, I got the basic idea though.
 
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That looks really good. I dont even know what you could do to make it better.
 
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Work on that cloud effect, it could be less dense and more transparent.

Also, make the silhouette of the person less dense as well, the sun itself blurs vision, so I recommend a form of blurring for this effect.
 
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i like it but i keep getting the impression that the guy is a cardboard prop in the wilderness.
 

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