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Since its teh Halloween time thought id share this, i had to make this for class, so it was asupose to have sounds, but you cant hear them
The Ghost
Written By: TANK
Introduction
I was about to go to sleep when out of the blue I heard a man scream next door. I called nine one, one immediately ,but they put me on hold. Then I decided to take up the investigation myself. I went downstairs opened my front door and went outside.
The Backyard
Walking down my backdoor stairs I Started to cross my backyard when a dog viscously barked on the other side of the fence, thank God it was in the complete other direction of in which I was heading. I opened my gate to the other side of the fence, I listened for any sounds there was nothing but silence .The silence was broken with a hooting of an owl and crickets. His backyard looked like one giant graveyard. I walked up to the backdoor of his house at the bottom of his stairs there was two dog statues staring at me watching me watch them. I came upon the last stair and looked up there was another statue, but this one was different half the face of the statue was gone I couldnât tell what it was.
The House
I made my way up to the back door, I went to knock but then I heard a scream again. I wasnât sure to go in or to wait for the police. Then another scream came from the dark house. I had to make the decision fast I had to help him I couldnât just sit here wondering if I should go in or not. Slowly but surely I built up enough courage to walk in with my chest sticking out I ran in saying âIâm coming hold onâ. I Turned to my right only to find a dead body I screamed like a little girl my chest deflating faster than a popping balloon, falling on the wall I fainted . That courage fled from my veins, blood streams, body and soul quicker than sound. After calming down I noticed that there wasnât any blood, no strangle marks, nor struggle. It was as if he was scared to death.
Stairs........Upstairs
I looked around the area to find any clues, nothing I found nothing, nothing was there it was a clean sweep who ever did this was a pro not even a footprint. Upstairs I heard a creak in the floor i looked above me dust from the floor landed in my eye, then it hit me faster than a speeding train, the killer was still in the house! I grabbed the nearest thing that could be used as a weapon it was a candle holder. I walked up to the spiral stair case, looked up and said here I go. Halfway up the spiral staircase the doorbell rang. I quickly ran to the door to open it thinking it was the police to find nothing but air. Before I could shut the door and turn around the radio came on a few rooms over it had a lot of static. When I got to that room someone was sitting in the chair facing the window out of my view. Then it said âSitâ. I did so thinking this was the killer. He turned around but it was to dark to see his face. The room suddenly got cold felt like I was in a giant freezer. then he said â Do u mind if I smoke ?â I said âNoâ the fire lit over next to the window. He got out of his chair and came over to me I looked at his face, it looked as if there was bullet holes all over his body, flesh was hanging from his face burn marks all over. It looked as if he was a âGHOSTâ he was paler than pale. I looked in to his eyes and said â What are--â before I could finish the sentence he was gone. When he left the room went back to its normal temperature and the fire went out. The room went dark again.I went back to the spiral staircase again and started back up the stairs.
The Three Hallways
At the top of the stairs there was three different hallways the one to my left looked as if it went on forever, the second one looked pitch black I couldnât see anything, the third one had only four doors two on the left side and two on the right side. I decided to pick the third one first. I made my way to the first door on the left I tried to open it but I was locked or something was holding it shut. Then the last door on the right side swung ajar. I ran around the corner and waited for whatever to come out, holding my candle holder up high ready to swing at any moment. A dog came out. It wasnât a puppy, it was a German Shepard . Half of the face was gone just like that statue at the backdoor. Then two more dogs came out but fully intact. Staring at me, they growled. I got up and ran as fast as I could to the nearest door. I ran into the door and slammed it shut before the dogs got to me. Then it went silent again I looked through the keyhole to see if anything was there. Nothing was there as if it was just a figment of my imagination. I slowly opened the door, looking around with caution, scared out of my wits. I was done with the investigation, I was to scared to go on. I was heading back to the stairs to go down stairs when I heard glass break downstairs. Then I heard a noise in the first room on the left you know the one that was locked. I walked up to the door and put my ear against it, listening for any sounds on the other side. A voice slowly laughed on the other side of the door. It sounded evil. I was afraid to try and open the door my heartbeat began to beat faster and faster. Until the door opened by itself. Looking to find nothing but air but I was wrong it was the ghost form earlier well what I thought was the ghost from earlier I wasn't sure if I should run or if I should attack him right then and there....I was starting to suspect that the ghost was the killer that killed Allen. But I heard another noise downstairs, then the ghost started to talk he said "Go......Go and Find Him who awaits you." It startled me the way he said it, it frightened me. He said "GO...GO now." I made my way down the stairs only to find the dead body from earlier then I saw the ghost again but it was in another room to my left and he said "im going to kill you" I was trembling. My body wouldn't move I was glued to the floor. He laughed, I grabbed the nearest thing, but then he laughed harder than he had laughed before then he said " have you forgoten im a ghost [laughing]." I swung the candle holder and it was unbelievable it went write through him. Cold sweat was dripping from my forehead. The first thing that went through my mind when it went through his body was im going to "DIE"!
THE GHOST [final chapter]
A voice came from behind me,I noticed that the ghost infront of me was now behind me. He said "Boo" i was shaking from head to toe i was to scared to move from where I was standing . I was to afraid to say please stop or dont kill me. I turned around and saw a knife in his hand ready to swing at me . He swung the knife I ducked just in time he missed and tried to cut me again and again until he cornered me in a corner. He raised his knife ready to stab me then he let it fly it went right in to me... I closed my eyes before he stabbed me. After a few minutes I opened my eyes to find the knife in me ,but I didnt feel anything. It was like it was a hallogram it had the expressiion on its face like I was supose to die of fright. Then it hit me thats how the man in the other room had died , there was no ghost, it was some guy controlling it from some room in the house with projecters I wasnt for sure but pretty sure. I got up and went through the hallogram and looked at it from behind I wondered why it didn't try and come after me again. Then i heard someone coming down the stairs running down like trying to get out then I saw him it was the controller of the hallogram he was heading for the door I said "STOP!!!" but he didnt listen he kept running for the door finally he got to the door opened it and as soon as he opened the door a pistol was pointed at his head. He gasped then he realised there was a badge on the shoulder of this being. Then the being said " FREEZE!!!!!!" he was about to run when he saw police enter from the backdoor. Putting his hands in the air he said " I scareeedddddd you" laughing. After they asked me a few questions down at the police station they let me go. They gave me an escort home when i got home i said bye, thanks feeling releaved. I was heading up my sidewalk and looked at the top right window of the dead mans house and saw a man looking at me staring back at me with flesh hanging from his face. Then he was gone. I walked up to his house and opened the door and walked in..........
To Be Continued....
The Ghost
Written By: TANK
Introduction
I was about to go to sleep when out of the blue I heard a man scream next door. I called nine one, one immediately ,but they put me on hold. Then I decided to take up the investigation myself. I went downstairs opened my front door and went outside.
The Backyard
Walking down my backdoor stairs I Started to cross my backyard when a dog viscously barked on the other side of the fence, thank God it was in the complete other direction of in which I was heading. I opened my gate to the other side of the fence, I listened for any sounds there was nothing but silence .The silence was broken with a hooting of an owl and crickets. His backyard looked like one giant graveyard. I walked up to the backdoor of his house at the bottom of his stairs there was two dog statues staring at me watching me watch them. I came upon the last stair and looked up there was another statue, but this one was different half the face of the statue was gone I couldnât tell what it was.
The House
I made my way up to the back door, I went to knock but then I heard a scream again. I wasnât sure to go in or to wait for the police. Then another scream came from the dark house. I had to make the decision fast I had to help him I couldnât just sit here wondering if I should go in or not. Slowly but surely I built up enough courage to walk in with my chest sticking out I ran in saying âIâm coming hold onâ. I Turned to my right only to find a dead body I screamed like a little girl my chest deflating faster than a popping balloon, falling on the wall I fainted . That courage fled from my veins, blood streams, body and soul quicker than sound. After calming down I noticed that there wasnât any blood, no strangle marks, nor struggle. It was as if he was scared to death.
Stairs........Upstairs
I looked around the area to find any clues, nothing I found nothing, nothing was there it was a clean sweep who ever did this was a pro not even a footprint. Upstairs I heard a creak in the floor i looked above me dust from the floor landed in my eye, then it hit me faster than a speeding train, the killer was still in the house! I grabbed the nearest thing that could be used as a weapon it was a candle holder. I walked up to the spiral stair case, looked up and said here I go. Halfway up the spiral staircase the doorbell rang. I quickly ran to the door to open it thinking it was the police to find nothing but air. Before I could shut the door and turn around the radio came on a few rooms over it had a lot of static. When I got to that room someone was sitting in the chair facing the window out of my view. Then it said âSitâ. I did so thinking this was the killer. He turned around but it was to dark to see his face. The room suddenly got cold felt like I was in a giant freezer. then he said â Do u mind if I smoke ?â I said âNoâ the fire lit over next to the window. He got out of his chair and came over to me I looked at his face, it looked as if there was bullet holes all over his body, flesh was hanging from his face burn marks all over. It looked as if he was a âGHOSTâ he was paler than pale. I looked in to his eyes and said â What are--â before I could finish the sentence he was gone. When he left the room went back to its normal temperature and the fire went out. The room went dark again.I went back to the spiral staircase again and started back up the stairs.
The Three Hallways
At the top of the stairs there was three different hallways the one to my left looked as if it went on forever, the second one looked pitch black I couldnât see anything, the third one had only four doors two on the left side and two on the right side. I decided to pick the third one first. I made my way to the first door on the left I tried to open it but I was locked or something was holding it shut. Then the last door on the right side swung ajar. I ran around the corner and waited for whatever to come out, holding my candle holder up high ready to swing at any moment. A dog came out. It wasnât a puppy, it was a German Shepard . Half of the face was gone just like that statue at the backdoor. Then two more dogs came out but fully intact. Staring at me, they growled. I got up and ran as fast as I could to the nearest door. I ran into the door and slammed it shut before the dogs got to me. Then it went silent again I looked through the keyhole to see if anything was there. Nothing was there as if it was just a figment of my imagination. I slowly opened the door, looking around with caution, scared out of my wits. I was done with the investigation, I was to scared to go on. I was heading back to the stairs to go down stairs when I heard glass break downstairs. Then I heard a noise in the first room on the left you know the one that was locked. I walked up to the door and put my ear against it, listening for any sounds on the other side. A voice slowly laughed on the other side of the door. It sounded evil. I was afraid to try and open the door my heartbeat began to beat faster and faster. Until the door opened by itself. Looking to find nothing but air but I was wrong it was the ghost form earlier well what I thought was the ghost from earlier I wasn't sure if I should run or if I should attack him right then and there....I was starting to suspect that the ghost was the killer that killed Allen. But I heard another noise downstairs, then the ghost started to talk he said "Go......Go and Find Him who awaits you." It startled me the way he said it, it frightened me. He said "GO...GO now." I made my way down the stairs only to find the dead body from earlier then I saw the ghost again but it was in another room to my left and he said "im going to kill you" I was trembling. My body wouldn't move I was glued to the floor. He laughed, I grabbed the nearest thing, but then he laughed harder than he had laughed before then he said " have you forgoten im a ghost [laughing]." I swung the candle holder and it was unbelievable it went write through him. Cold sweat was dripping from my forehead. The first thing that went through my mind when it went through his body was im going to "DIE"!
THE GHOST [final chapter]
A voice came from behind me,I noticed that the ghost infront of me was now behind me. He said "Boo" i was shaking from head to toe i was to scared to move from where I was standing . I was to afraid to say please stop or dont kill me. I turned around and saw a knife in his hand ready to swing at me . He swung the knife I ducked just in time he missed and tried to cut me again and again until he cornered me in a corner. He raised his knife ready to stab me then he let it fly it went right in to me... I closed my eyes before he stabbed me. After a few minutes I opened my eyes to find the knife in me ,but I didnt feel anything. It was like it was a hallogram it had the expressiion on its face like I was supose to die of fright. Then it hit me thats how the man in the other room had died , there was no ghost, it was some guy controlling it from some room in the house with projecters I wasnt for sure but pretty sure. I got up and went through the hallogram and looked at it from behind I wondered why it didn't try and come after me again. Then i heard someone coming down the stairs running down like trying to get out then I saw him it was the controller of the hallogram he was heading for the door I said "STOP!!!" but he didnt listen he kept running for the door finally he got to the door opened it and as soon as he opened the door a pistol was pointed at his head. He gasped then he realised there was a badge on the shoulder of this being. Then the being said " FREEZE!!!!!!" he was about to run when he saw police enter from the backdoor. Putting his hands in the air he said " I scareeedddddd you" laughing. After they asked me a few questions down at the police station they let me go. They gave me an escort home when i got home i said bye, thanks feeling releaved. I was heading up my sidewalk and looked at the top right window of the dead mans house and saw a man looking at me staring back at me with flesh hanging from his face. Then he was gone. I walked up to his house and opened the door and walked in..........
To Be Continued....
