*** NOT MY WORK ***
Im hosting it temporarily for you, because i believe people here are too lazy to go to dev art to see ur cg, also i resized it for photobucket, hope u dont mind
Right, its quite an awesome CG imo, the blood effect is quite brilliant, however for ur cg work imo it cud use a little more contrast in the colours add some highlights, not as much as on ur Girl with the guns though (she was shiny =O), also i think the shaddows cud be a little darker.
For the lineart there are a few problems, i feel the eyes are and too much of a slanted angle, i think they are a little too far apart as well, plus im not fond of the shape but that cud be down to my personal preferance. The problem i see with the pic is that the movement made with the arm isnt dynamic enough, i think the arm should be straighter and the torso should be at a sharper angle, it lacks a little foreshortening in the arm. It also seems that the the pectorial muscles are joined too low down on the arm, pectorial muscles are more dynamic, in that pose the armpit wouldnt be so deep, and the arm is slightly disjointed from the shoulder (the shoulder should be closer to us). The hand on the face, like said the thumb is a little wrong
, but u know that, if i was u i wudda tried making the fingers look like they were grasping onto his face stronger with more force. His forearms are a little weakly built wen compared to his upper arms too, they lack deffintion and they should be bulkier towards the shoulder. As i said with the torso, i think the hips should be at a sharper angle too. His mouth should be a little bigger too, at the moment it isnt much of an emotional grinding of the teeth as i think it should be.
The line work itself is great on the whole, however the outer edges of objects are usually drawn thicker to push the character forward, i can see how on the underneath of the arm the line isnt strong enough, it makes it blend too much into the background.
Anyway i think it is a great peice of work and i must say your style is shaping up quite nicely, i like it, keep it up