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Ok, i tried another thing that is new to me, scenery. i also didnt feel that a anime style cartoon fitted this position , so i made it a bit different. im not too good with making the water look good.


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*edit* i spelt scenery wrong .. im so lame .. >_>
 
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I like it, whenever I look out to sea I kinda get the feeling of immortality, the ocean keeps going as far as you can see. It eclipses transience. Nice.
 
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thanx :$ ..... now that i think about it .. shouldnt the waterline be heeps strait? cause it is really far away, woudnt those be damn big waves?
 
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:eek:! also......what about moving the actuall water line down? might that give it the effect of it being far away?
 
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I wouldn't like to be out there on a boat :p

Other then the horizon it's fine

I fixed the topic name for you too :)
 
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It's kinda dark :rolleyes: Kinda makes ya sad :smile: But still very nice:D
 
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Ok... i straitend up the horizon, and i also added a "glare effect" which .. dosnt ... look ... that ... good ? ..
 
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Maybe you should change the man on the cliff a bit :] ...He looks like a wooden plank..but that's just me ;)
 
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Deverz said:
I wouldn't like to be out there on a boat :p

Other then the horizon it's fine

I fixed the topic name for you too :)

OMG thanx d00d .... :( now i dont look like THAT much of a ****head.. :p
 
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hmm.....

looks......good but i still think it looks like a spirit bomb..:p. LOL.
 
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davidyau_22 said:
looks......good but i still think it looks like a spirit bomb..:p. LOL.
LOL, i wouldnt like to be on the end of that thing ..:S maby i should add more detalil to it to make it look like the moon? ...
 
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Correct me if I'm wrong o_o ..but if there's a sunset.. shouldn't there be red/orange colours...unless it's some kind of freaky world where it's dark before the sun has set :p
 
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The guy's feet stick out to the side so he looks like cardboard o_O
 
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YAh, work on the guy alot. Also work on the grass area, it just looks like some grass is sitting their on the water. Need more detail. And the stars don't look right.
 
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I just noticed that the dude on the "cliff" looks like he's leaning forward, IE, about to jump. Might wanna change that lol.
 
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learn a lil perspective at least if ur gonna do a landscape, and check ur shadows ;)l

 

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