=O SV's first try at...

[Suh Dude]

I like the naruto one alot. Good job Super Artist. =]

 

[bapplebo]

The Naruto one in your latest post looks kinda... unposed. He looks like he's flying. Or chubby. One of his legs are weird anyway.

 

[Super Veggeto]

I actually think that this specific Naruto drawing sucks XD It was kinda rushed but I thought I should post it anyway =P, oh well =]

The last one, the green one XD is Reptile, a ninja from Mortal Kombat.
Speaking of him, been working on the front ref for a while to make sure it looks good, have a look:

Any suggestions? I'm.... having doubts about the arms/hands... maybe hands too small...im not sure...maybe it's just me =o ill go work on the side ref for now =] keep the comments flowing people ^_^

 

[ShadyD]

arms seem short to me? dunno.. shouldnt it reach untill half thigh?

 

[Super Veggeto]

Should reach untill the crotch as far as I know but if anyone els thinks i should make em' longer I will =o

 

[Fire Phoenix]

I think it's the size ratio. If you look at the arms they look a tad small compared to the hands. That or the hands are too big for the arms. Or something to that degree. Also looks like the arms need to be a bit thicker. But that's just me

 

[Skiwan]

nice stuff in this thread ^_^ i really like the vegeta, my crits for him is that his left eye looks a little out of perspective, and the leg on the right should be closer/longer than the one on the left, other than that, awesome D:

The latest reptile has some proportion issues, first of all the head looks a little big, and the arms look a little short, the top of the palms should be in line with the crotch, the forearm needs to be extended a little, also the hips are a little too small for the size of the chest, the chest seems a little over sized to me.

keep up the good work, its nice to see more drawings around here.

 

[Rayna]

I like the Vegeta one, but the arm to the right may be a bit wierd in perspective. Actually both of the arms are.
Also agreed with Davidskiwan about the leg.

That Naruto drawing is a bit off and sloppy, I think you have potential to do alot better.

The reptile man looks nice, the hands need improvement though.
Also I think that if you are going to color them, dont shade and color with pencil before because it makes it look messyer.

That last reptile man you posted, the arms are a bit too short and thin, in comparison to the rest of the body.

Keep them coming :smile:

 

[Super Veggeto]

Thanks people =] fixed the Reptile ref, proportion wise and I think it's looking much better =D
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/1790/reptilefront1ju.jpg

Gonna match the side now =]

Edit:
*Fixed the legs anatomy from a ref i got from a friend =]

 

[Rayna]

Looking good, now is it me or is there something still not right with the arms? Something bugs me about them.

 

[donnierisk]

Nah he's arms are fine now, he looks great, you're probably thinking that because the arms are straight and the hands are facing towards us.

 

[Rayna]

Actually when giving them a seccond look the arms are still a little bit short, but other than that they are good.

 

[Super Veggeto]

I tried to make the arms longer but it looked really weird...ill keep it this way for now untill ill get more crits =p ill check it further with other people.

"finished" the side ref, still im not so sure about it...still...has the weird proportions feeling...
crit away =]

Oh and...heh something I drew in 15 mins or so XD came out quite nice imo though =P

 

[Rayna]

This seccond one from your last post does not represent your abilities I believe. :3
But maybe you intended it to be in a much less realistic style too.

 

[Fire Phoenix]

The second one I like everything but the arms/hands

Liking the head/face

 

[Super Veggeto]

This seccond one from your last post does not represent your abilities I believe. :3
But maybe you intended it to be in a much less realistic style too.

Of course XD I wasnt really aiming for realistic...it's a random drawing/sketch of...something that just came into mind =P

 

[Rayna]

Well I suposed, but you can draw a unrealistic situation realistically, if you get what I mean.

 

[Super Veggeto]

I know, again, if I wanted to ^_^"
prefered to go on an anime-ish look plus my own imagination.

 

[PiXel]

all what bothers me at the naruto-ish picture the long neck and the short legs... else fine...+
crits on the ref:
feet is from the side to small, as i see "no ass" , and please... he got a scrotch >_< poor guy.... (you know what i mean) and isnt the neck from the front view abit to thick?

thats all

 

[Super Veggeto]

all what bothers me at the naruto-ish picture the long neck and the short legs... else fine...+

Ohhh you probably mean that last drawing...
who said the legs start where the shirt ends?.. try to look beyond the clothes...=P
NOT LIKE THAT!!!!
and yes the neck is long, i figured that before i even posted it but it was unfixable for the moment.

crits on the ref:
feet is from the side to small

as i see "no ass" , and please... he got a scrotch >_< poor guy.... (you know what i mean)

In that ref you cant actually see his ass through the arm.. the redish lines are just for you to see that theres something there...=p dont mind those red lines...i think ill have to make another ref for those little details anyway =P
oh and about the scrotch thing....what did you mean?

and isnt the neck from the front view abit to thick?

Well, thats a matter of how bulked up he is...proportion wise it's fine, as I heard from other people, it's just a matter of how I want it, looks good compared to the body if thats what you mean.


Anyway, I just saw that the legs look a little skinny from the side...including the waist, fix fix fix.