New Wallpaper

[Gama]

So I decided to brance off anime and make a wallpaper for my cus football team just wondering what you guys think

simple but stylish:

 

[Adaptus]

If I have to be honest - the random lines make it look like some 4 year old went and played around in Paint or something. There's nothing wrong with the technique itself, but I think it works better on a smaller scale, instead of a whole wallpaper.

 

[L]

I think it would look better if the lines were to have a certain trail of where the ball has been, from the view of the perspective.
Like, have a 3D "cylinder-like trail" to where the ball is, making it the focal point.
Remove the dripping line things as well.

 

[Gama]

better or still needs more work?

*EDIT* updated, friend suggested this:

 

[Adaptus]

I think that last one is the best one yet, but it's still a little bit empty. Maybe add two or three other players to make it a bit more interesting. :3

 

[Gama]

lol had to be done

 

[L]

This is what I meant, I'm sure you can get those lines better than me though.
The perspective is 'where the ball has been already'

 

[Jariroth]

Try using the non-freehand pen tool for the balls "afterimage". So you can make curve smoother looking.

 

[Valeska]

i'd like fatal his version, make it kinda like his:]

 

[MF29]

The iPod version owns.