Naruto drawing

[essentara]

a naruto im working or worked on (not sure yet)
crits accepted, just tell me what you guys think

i scanned it a bit sideways :laff:

 

[Gon]

Well, I think he's pretty good, but his forehead needs to be more covered and his hair needs to be straightend out alot more and also extend his hair a little more back. His eyebrow is also too big and he seems kind of fat.

Other than that...
Great work, just keep practicing and you'll eventually get Naruto down!

 

[Chakra-X]

It looks like a 2-4 year older Naruto. IF he was like that, he would probably look similar to that! But I think it's that is face is too long, makingh im look older, and his coat puff needs to be a lill bigger, if your going for the official look.

 

[Gama]

7/10 gj man keep it up

 

[essentara]

thanks for the comments
im gonna try to correct it soon, (its just school started and im loaded with work..) and then i would like to try and color ('less someone would be willing to do it)
btw chakra-x coat puffy thingy= white thingy at top?
and to make him look younger would rounding the face a bit more help...

 

[Draylock1]

Its pretty good, but your left eye makes naruto look cross-eyed crazy.