OK,now comes what?OK,we talked smack,now comes battle:
"Viki@killer comes to empty playground.He saw on end of playground,who else then his former enemy,Mystic Saiyan.Viki stares at him about minute,then the ultimate fight begins!Viki@killer doing ki-blasts around playground,mystic saiyan always get hit.He knows that he can't beat
[email protected] charges a generic-beam at viki@killer,but viki dodges him,and teleports to mystic saiyan,and kicks him in a face.Mystic saiyan,all in blood,is despearte how is viki@killer that strong.Viki@killer founds a steel-chair,and stars to hit mystic saiyan with that.Mystic saiyan teleports upper,and shoots a big death-ball at
[email protected]@killer charges 1 kametorpedo,and shoots at that deathball.Viki@killer's kametorpedo was too strong,and deathball hits mystic saiyan.Mystic saiyan starts to hit Viki@killer with punch and kicks.Viki@killer stays on place,until Mystic_Saiyan stops hit him.When mystic saiyan stop hiting him,Viki@killer fast kicks him on grass.Then Viki@killer takes a pencil from his secret bag,and starts to write his name on mystic saiyan who just stares at him while he's writing,and waits until his energy recharges.Mystic saiyan knows that he will colapse from viki@killer's power,but waits for moment in which viki@killer will be unready.
All in anger,mystic saiyan tries to retreat his dragonball-z powers,but he's unable,and viki@killer sings,and writes his name(s) on mystic saiyan's face.
Viki@killer know,that,if mystic saiyan once again tries to attack him,mystic saiyan will be murdored.Viki@killer lucky sings and writes his name on mystic saiyan,while mystic saiyan tries to recover his powers.When mystic_saiyan's powers returned,he started to blow Viki@killer with renzoku.Viki@killer falls on grass,but quickly recovers,and started to punch Mystic Saiyan.Viki@killer charges Destructo Disc on Mystic Saiyan,and smiles him in face.He wants to kill him badly!But mystic saiyan gets up,and disk misses!Viki@killer in anger,starts to punch Mystic Saiyan.He blowed,and blowed,and blowed mystic saiyan with deathly kicks!When mystic saiyan got into wall,Viki@killer quickly charged rings and traped mystic saiyan with rings in wall!Mystic saiyan got traped in wall,and Viki@killer started to hit him with deathly punches,and mystic saiyan started to cry.Viki@killer started to talk that mystic saiyan tooked his lolypop when he was child,and he tooked his chocolate,too,and Viki@killer knowed from the moment when mystic_saiyan tooked his chocolate,that he's not his friend,that he is his enemy,which he needed to beat..."
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I now fixed my story-is it good now?
