My Lyrics.

[OneWingedAngel]

Hey, I wrote 3 songs and I was wondering what you guys think.


Night Life

We can't go wrong this time
The people scream as the end comes near
A terrible silence as people fear
But then a black shadow consumes our souls

(Chorus)

Notthing but hatred and agony
Fear and loathing all around
The darkness of city life

Notthing but hatred and agony
Fear and loathing all around
The darkness of city life

Notthing but hatred and agony
Fear and loathing all around
The darkness of city life
Its Hell

Everyone is feeling pain as the night sky rolls in
most of everyone runs inside cause at this midnight hour
the many faces of the city come out like the
Whores and there pimps... The criminals and gangs...
The carnage just never ends as bullets fly and people die

(Chorus)

Notthing but hatred and agony
Fear and loathing all around
The darkness of city life

Notthing but hatred and agony
Fear and loathing all around
The darkness of city life

Notthing but hatred and agony
Fear and loathing all around
The darkness of city life
Its Hell

We can't go wrong this time
The people scream as the end comes near
A terrible silence as people fear
But then a black shadow consumes our souls
Things are not as they seem cause its falling into place.


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Anger


We all have somthing we want
We all have somthing we fear
But its not like it matters cause we end up losing it all
This realm of hatred and pity and agony


Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
And sooner or later it all fails


When I stand up to fight I get knocked down
When I run in fear I'm mocked and laughed at
When I try to ignore them they huant me each day of my life
I just can't go on wait to find somthing to live for



Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
And sooner or later it all fails


This hatred towards my enemies grows more andm ore each day
I can't hold this in each day of my life
I feel like ripping them apart this anger is rising
I feel a burning sensation in my throat
There time is up and the debts are long overdue



Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
Losing hope... some of us are just losing hope
The tim is now and I'm out for blood.


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Depression


The sickness deep within your gut
feeling like your being watched thinking everyones out to get you.
Not knowing where to turn, Not knowing where to run.


Fear,Pain,Hatred,Disgust and lets not forget depression!
Fear,Pain,Hatred,Disgust and lets not forget depression!
Fear,Pain,Hatred,Disgust and lets not forget... not forget...not forget
Anger!


Its the defiant cries of the childeren yelling and screaming...
When everyone is gone and no one is there and all you can do to
stop from going mad is slash your wrists
and end this horrible torment... end this horrible torment.... End it all
here and now!


Fear,Pain,Hatred,Disgust and lets not forget depression!
Fear,Pain,Hatred,Disgust and lets not forget depression!
Fear,Pain,Hatred,Disgust and lets not forget... not forget... not forget
Anger!


The cries of hatred deep in your soul... Knowing sooner or later your
gonna break
Not knowing what to do fear of death, fear of life, fear of everything.
Turning to your trusty knife or that bridge you drive over everyday...


Depression... The sickness deep within your gut
feeling like your being watched thinking everyones out to get you.
Not knowing where to turn, Not knowing where to run.


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Tell me what you guys think. I do relieze osme are repetitive but I'm still getting better.

So post what you guys think.

 

[suicidal_maniac]

I like them. Can you give us a better idea of the beat, tempo, volume of the song/s.

 

[Trickster]

ver' nice, the first song feels like it should be a slipknot/fear factory type of sound. it'd be a good death metal song with those lyrics, second one would be a nice acoustic song tho, nice stuff. I tried writing a song once so i know how hard it is :smile:

 

[OneWingedAngel]

Well see I'm buying a Bass and an Amp
and my friend has a drum set and my other friend has an electric guitar sooo you get the picture. Ya it can be hard to write them I wrote a love song. Its ok meh thinks.


Here j00 go.
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All I want


I'm sitting here letting my mind wonder off
as images of me and you enter my mind
I'd love to be able to spend my days with you
talking about our lives and sharing information


I know it all sounds lame and stupid but baby your the only
thing on my mind theres so many tihngs I'd love to share with you
but I just don't have the courage to ask you out
so I hope to win you over by writing this for you


Cause baby if it was me and you just picture it we'd talk about
all the stuff we wanted and go out
All I want is to be with you in thick and thin I'd give
my last breath of oxygen just to have one day to prove to you
I'm worthy of your love.


I can't give you everything you ever wanted but
I can give you my heart and trust and everything in between
I know it sounds crazy and hard to believe but please baby please
give me one chance to be with you and spend my days holding oyu in my arms


Even if I had enough courage to ask you out
If you said "no" my heart would be broken and these dreams become
notthing and then I can't even dream about me and you.
But what if you said yes and it worked out fine I'd be living a dream not worthy
for me.. Its just to hard to think about and I'm just wasteing time


All I have are dreams so I'll try this now
Come on baby give me a chance let me have a chance
I know its like a million to one but it'd be worth it just to hold your hand
and talk with you and share dreams and personal tohughts
But just remember I'm always gonna be thinking about you...