My first animation

[PRJ]

Just made a random Fight with sprites
This is only a preview and my first Animation O_O (sprites were found in google :devgrin: )

Tell me what you think about it and how i can improve it

Editted by Judge,

scroll down for the full animation he made, this first version had offensive words in it. so it was editted out.

- Judge

 

[Marauder]

lol,cute...
the text isnt that clear in it, should make the text abit bigger

 

[PRJ]

Thanks fixed that and now trying to make full fight of it ^_^

EDIT: Here it is! the full animation o_o

 

[Saiga]

I think you need to redesign the text presentation. Maybe put it in boxes or something. The speech bubbles are a lil sloppy. I like it though, good job.

 

[PRJ]

Ill see if i can fix that later (tired of paint ^_^)

 

[PiXel]

NOt very good.... but if its ur first try.... hmm okay ^^
But me really dont likes them!
I know if u using Adobe photoshop there is a little prob with all... -.- but its not bad if u working abit more and harder .... just thinking for me ^^
Also What i mean with work harder .::::
To work harder it means.... Make the story there a action what people can expect the story ^^ (**** ENGLISH!) Also make it more smooth and that more and more thingy will look better! Look at ur final Flash in ur 2nd gif! U can use the end of the FF and go on then! make then mroe lines of the trail!..... O.O Get the point?

 

[Judge]

hmm been a while since I last saw something like that before.

I think you should spend less time on the length of the animation and the 'story'. and more time on the quality of it. like what was said before, the textbubbles are a bit sloppy. also there is no background.

I editted your first post, to leave out the .gif. it had provoking words in it, that might offend users.

 

[Marauder]

i agree with judge...should work more on the quality of it..
but i liked it anyways..looks nice, very good for a first imo