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This is my 4th attempt at lyrics. There not the greatest, but hey, im trying to improve.
as of now, i have starting line and then chourus, but not finished song.
The tune is a slow rock beat not too slow, something like 3 days grace.
the part i posted a few minutes ago, but now i put fast together ther rest of the song. after the first chorus is what i made up in a 5 min period, C&C are welcome it is again my 4th attempt.
I'm all alone, Walking down this road
But by my side, your right there flying high
I try to talk, no response i feel so cold
and yet so old, I fear youvâe died
[chorus]
You wait, You cry
You fly with your wings up high.
You wait, you die,
You slowly fade away,
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me,
Please come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me now.
Please come back....
[end chorus]
I was there from beginning to end.
Defending you till my last breath
Continuing to sin, helping you hand and hand
From now till then, im still the same, so take my blame.
I didnât mean for this to happen
I didnât mean for it to go this far
I didnât mean for me not to be there
I didnât mean for me not to care.
But still you wait, after all Iâve done
And still you wait, after all the fun.
[chorus]
You wait, You cry
You fly with your wings up high.
You wait, you die,
You slowly fade away,
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me,
Please come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me now.
I canât believe this has finally happened
Your waiting for me to come, but I have to stay
Another day and live for you and me to finally say
I love you, I love you..
as of now, i have starting line and then chourus, but not finished song.
The tune is a slow rock beat not too slow, something like 3 days grace.
the part i posted a few minutes ago, but now i put fast together ther rest of the song. after the first chorus is what i made up in a 5 min period, C&C are welcome it is again my 4th attempt.
I'm all alone, Walking down this road
But by my side, your right there flying high
I try to talk, no response i feel so cold
and yet so old, I fear youvâe died
[chorus]
You wait, You cry
You fly with your wings up high.
You wait, you die,
You slowly fade away,
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me,
Please come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me now.
Please come back....
[end chorus]
I was there from beginning to end.
Defending you till my last breath
Continuing to sin, helping you hand and hand
From now till then, im still the same, so take my blame.
I didnât mean for this to happen
I didnât mean for it to go this far
I didnât mean for me not to be there
I didnât mean for me not to care.
But still you wait, after all Iâve done
And still you wait, after all the fun.
[chorus]
You wait, You cry
You fly with your wings up high.
You wait, you die,
You slowly fade away,
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me,
Please come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me
Come back to me now.
I canât believe this has finally happened
Your waiting for me to come, but I have to stay
Another day and live for you and me to finally say
I love you, I love you..