Kid buu

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Ok, I started this kid-buu like 2 days ago off of my ref, I think its turning out pretty nice, considering its my second model in gmax.

Well, c+c please

 
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you realise that youve made his arm so that there is no elbow area right? there should be a definate bicep, then part of his forearm THEN his arm guard, not just some big blob for his upper arm >_>

also, you made his face shaped like this: V. instead of : U
 
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When you`ve posted your ref in the art forum, everyone told you that the thin torso area must be longer... you didn`t liste, and now you`ve made a mistake in your model itself. Next time, if you ask for crits, listen to them ;)
 
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I agree the ref is very inaccurate, sorry..

As for the model, i guess its ok but the proportions of his face are weird and from all the model looks like everythings crammed on on buu's torso. The side ref from the looks of it isn't very accurate. Also the area of his brow has bad polyflow on where it ends and plus the neck

Thats all for now
 
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RastaDude said:
When you`ve posted your ref in the art forum, everyone told you that the thin torso area must be longer... you didn`t liste, and now you`ve made a mistake in your model itself. Next time, if you ask for crits, listen to them ;)
I can always stretch the torso... And gir... i dont see what you mean for the face
 
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considering its your second gmax model I think it's coming along good. I'm finding it hard switching to 3ds max, so keep up the good work
 

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