Well I envy you for owning a copy of 3smax.. But about this image, you should have spruced it up, if you were going for an ambience effect.. the white is way to dull to be on that black background.. Its cool other than that.
Before you try and use 3dsm, you really should try and learn a primary image program first ( e.g. Photoshop ). The text is... horrible but I suppose the actual image could be used in a sig or wallpaper or something.