i blow at CG

[VivaLaPineapple]

yeah i just cannot get this colored the wya i want but anyway what do u guys think? what could be inproved aswell. i used a valkyre profile pic as a reference for the head.

 

[GMan]

Skywalker?

 

[Ryoko]

If I were you, I would try smuding more.Especially the lips. But I can't see much wrong with it. In fact, I like it.

 

[Skiwan]

looking good, you need greater contrast of light and dark, thats what makes images stick out, it looks like you need to make the shadows darker, and make the light more apparent, from the lightsource i think your using, i think there should be a shadow under his hair.... BTW, it looks like great lineart, good job on that as well

 

[Alteh]

Looks pretty good, except some overlapping lines and some non connecting lines. Who is supposed to be?