Here i go again :)

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Two models to show

First off frieza



And something im new to, naruto modelling, a big thanks to dave for letting me use his ref



Remember im new to it so dont flame me o.0, i have no idea how im gonna do the hair though, i know its not much atm but im gonna work on it asap cuz i've gotta lota school work atm

 

[Sicron]

freeza's feet are a bit too bit and shoulnt be so blocky, and...whats naruto character is that supposed to be X_x?

 

[Mr. Phonso]

freeza is coming along nicely, and its supposed to be kakashi

 

[luckyownz92]

Another young Kakashi!! Nice job with this reck and I agree with sicron those feet of friezas are way to big

 

[Sicron]

Ah young kakashi...then i think his legs are a bit to long, not sure tho

 

[Mr. Phonso]

i think its kakashi, not young, altho he might be doing it but he told me on msn hes just doing kakashi

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Its young kakashi actually, i'm using dave's ref so the legs should be fine..ill try and post an update tomorrow, and for frieza's feet i have fixed

edit:

ignore the hair and the thing around his torso, its just there for show

 

[Sicron]

well he just looks to tall to be young kakashi...

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Pikkon

more practice

 

[Mr. Phonso]

cool seems like your getting a lot better, i should make a pikkon too

 

[Mr-Vampire]

where can i download Milkshape 3D 1.70

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Finished, cept for hat, drawovers are welcome, i have a crap ref

 

[Jedi Vegeta]

shoulders seem a tad narrow on your pikkon..i couldn't find any good reference but other then that it looks good

 

[Growler]

what the hell, lol, im making pikkon, MAKE UR OWN MODELS, STOP SNAKING!

 

[CM]

Dan16, CrackerJack made a Pikkon a while ago. "MAKE UR OWN MODELS, STOP SNAKING!"

Get the point?

Ok.

The young kakashi seems... disproportionate. I can't really see much with the tiny pic and all (and my high resolution), but the hips should be less wide, hands bigger, head wider, and he needs to be a bit shorter. He also has deformation problems, but as a beginner you probably haven't tried that yet, just aiming for shape. The Pikkon looks better, but the skirt/coat thing looks way to stiff and straight, and his general structure is weird. Head isn't very detailed... and it just looks off somehow.

 

[Growler]

Dan16, CrackerJack made a Pikkon a while ago. "MAKE UR OWN MODELS, STOP SNAKING!"

Get the point?

Ok.

The young kakashi seems... disproportionate. I can't really see much with the tiny pic and all (and my high resolution), but the hips should be less wide, hands bigger, head wider, and he needs to be a bit shorter. He also has deformation problems, but as a beginner you probably haven't tried that yet, just aiming for shape. The Pikkon looks better, but the skirt/coat thing looks way to stiff and straight, and his general structure is weird. Head isn't very detailed... and it just looks off somehow.

no, i dont get your point... sorry, ur gonna have to explain more. Idk who crackerjack is. Besides, it was a joke for reckoning, not you, son... take a seat.

On topic, nice naruto model

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

no, i dont get your point... sorry, ur gonna have to explain more. Idk who crackerjack is. Besides, it was a joke for reckoning, not you, son... take a seat.

On topic, nice naruto model

thanks..

and next time you might wanna say jk...

edit: update + mesh, i just changed some stuff around and added a few polies

 

[Growler]

his head is very undetailed. His arms shoot out and seem to get larger as they go out. His clothing is soo blocky. His head is very wierdly shaped and it seems like the top of his head is about to burst.

 

[CM]

Son? Hah. Son. How old are you anyway?

Anyway, back to your Pikkon. It's better, but I suggest editting the way the polygons flow. You need a couple of extra rows of polys on the torso. Also, try to follow a strict polygon flow. For example. make sure the torso goes something like this:
_______
l_l_l_l_l_l
l_l_l_l_l_l

Not all wild and out of nowhere with triangles flying everywhere. Don't be afraid to add polygons. I'd say, for a beginner, you should start making 2000-ish poly models, then teach yourself to delete polys without changing the poly flow or the structure and shape. Also, the front of the knees and the back of the elbows should look something like this:

/l\
\l/

That way, they deform better. Sorry for the horrible illustrations, I'm on a PDA and I can't really be bothered to paint for you. I'll give you a drawover or two on the weekend, if I have time.

Another tip, try deleting Pikkon's huge spherical head before you add on the cap, cause if it isn't going to show, then it'd be useless and a general pain to keep it. And make the skirt/robe more like this:

) (

Rather than:

( )

 

[Damaera]

Head looks scary

Isn't it sopossed to be more of a 'roundish' shaped head?