February Tide

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This may seem out of place
Your subtle glance brings a smile to my face
And I thought it was so bizarre
The way the sun hit your eyes
Thinking of you is like waking up to the sunrise
The sun is rising with the tide

Sitting by the water's edge
Underneath this pale light
I wish I could pause this moment forever

You said we needed time
I'm already there
And now you left me waiting
The sand on my feet

Just the sound of your voice
It brings me comfort inside
Sitting by the old side with your hands in mine
Underneath this February sky

You said we needed time
I'm already there
And now you left me waiting
The sand on my feet

Viewing the ocean from the sun's point of view
I miss the reflection and the contrast

You said we needed time
I'm already there
And now you left me waiting
The sand on my feet


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Taken 2 nights ago. The moon turned orange..
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/7124553/

 
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Very nice tim The shot is really good but I honoustly like the poem more
It also written in a way so you can use it in a sing could sound really awesome well thats my opinion :D
Very g00d
 
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Nice picture I really like the clouds and the color in it. Wait a second you didn't write the poem??? so have your written those other poems that were with your manips/pics, or did you get them from somewhere else.
 
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very nice pic...
shading is great and all.....nice shot
 
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very nice man, also it's a good job on the shot especially because it was during night time, or close to it. it's very hard to shoot good shots, loads of chance of getting loads of noise in it etc,.
 
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I wrote all the others. You can not find them anywhere else, I also took credit for all my poems.
 

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