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Hehe, the newest scribble....



Crits+Comments? The left hand (actual left hand) is a little skewed i know -_-
 
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The chest looks funny, the right breast looks smaller than the left one.
 
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That's just positioning and pressure i think.

Altho, it looks nice i believe at that angle the back portions should be a little larger.
 
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Ultima2_freeze said:
That's just positioning and pressure i think.

Altho, it looks nice i believe at that angle the back portions should be a little larger.
I thought about that too, but then, with the position of the arm, shouldn't the right one be hanging out more, not the left one, because the left one is being pushed up by the forearm?
 
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woah, hehe. fast comments ^_^

girls always get more views it seems, and wth /guns/ aswell?!?!
/me dies
 
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Work on the viewing. She's all huge in the front and her legs and stuff are all small. That part isnt that far back.
 
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Yeah, i would let you slide and call it a style. ;) but i've been secretly watching you and that's not ur style.
 
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slightly updated....

the perspective on the legs was indeed off, taking 15 away from the picture helped me see that
 
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good work man, i like it, i like it alot, if i were u dude, i'd CG that baby :p
 
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she's gettin all purdy as we speak, just wanted to get some general ctits on the lineart in 1st :D
 
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ahh I see a small 'x'. :O, fix it please. i'll check back tomorrow.
 
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Well, you know about her hand (the skewed one). Other then that, her nose looks weird, and the far foot (i think its her left, our right) looks as if the ankle is like not there... plus, she has some real oily skin :p but other then that its really nice, good job!
 

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