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I started on this story along time ago in the name of a roleplay I used to be a part of. It started off being based loosely in the Dragon Ball Z world, but the story itself, and the backstory driving it has developed so far along on its own that I think its too far from its origins to be called a Fan Fic.
In a way, its loosely tied to my previous fic here
I've written out quite a bit of this story, but I never finished, and there's still a long ways to go before I can call it done. I'm thinking about actually working on it in the near future, and permanently finishing it, but if I don't then be prepared for a cliffhanger.
Hope you enjoy ^^
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Beginning's End
Throughout human history, there are times in which it is necessary for men to inflict harm on each other. Reason's for this often vary. Food, land, shelter, but the means to reach these goals are always the same. Conflict. Battle. Two things that while easy to initiate, were difficult to prevail in. It was soon realized by the primitive humans that perhaps conflict would be easier if they had something that would give them an advantage over their opponents.
And so men build weapons to aide them in their conflict and ultimately in reaching their goal, for the simple use of fists alone is often not enough to overpower a great number of adversaries. First came clubs, large, thick sticks carved of wood or chiseled of stone for those who possessed great strength, and they were used to bash out the brains of an enemy.
Next, were the knives. Short, sharp weapons, but these were for the greater part only made of stone, as it was soon found that wood carved thin and sharp enough to be dangerous, splintered and shattered against skin or armor.
After the knives, came swords, and thanks to the discovery of iron, these weapons were now far more effective at killing people than anything that had come before. The swords were sharp, long, and sometimes curved affairs, able to disembowel a man in a single sweep, and variations in size, and design quickly arose. Small and thin for quicker, more precision strikes, and broad and thick, for blows that could cleave a person in two.
And of course, we can't forget arrows. Powerful ranged weapons, shot from a long piece of wood with a string tightly tying the ends together. They were fairly primitive in design, but developed into quite an effective way of taking of life. No longer did you have to face your enemy, see the life force drain from his body as your weapon pierced his heart. You could kill him from afar, a hundred paces distance even, and now you didn't have to call yourself a murderer.
As the centuries past, someone came up with the idea for the gun. A brilliant weapon it was in its day. Gunpowder was used to fired a projectile, one usually of steel or some other such metal, at a person. And the best part was, it was now ever easier than before to kill. No armor could block this weapon, it was near impossible to dodge, and the effort required on the users part was quite minimal. A mere twitch of a finger was sufficient, and then your adversary would be quite dead.
More time came and went, and as people grew more "civilized" and nations and laws were created to provide for the many, humans created even more ludicrous reasons to fight. Before, it had at least been something physical, something tangible they could actually use, or needed for their survival. But as the human race had developed, the conflict their ancestor's had engaged slowly became a necessary part of life in subsequent generations, until finally battle was no longer conducted on a random basis, but as a required and controlled cycle.
Those who were in power over others manipulated their charges to create disputes, and conflicts arose that stemmed from something trivial like a person's skin color, or the way they spoke, or even the very ideas and beliefs they had in their head. And as the reasons became more absurd, technology became more advanced, and each advance provided people with increasingly vicious means in which to destroy one another. Cannons, bombs, missiles. It became so that it was no longer necessary to even be on the same continent as your foe. You could just fire a missile and watch a great many of your enemies die in the resulting conflagration.
And throughout all this, the Gods in the heaven's above had watched, fascinated, horrified, and saddened all at once at such a potentially great race being torn to pieces by their own greed, prejudice, and outright stupidity. However, they did nothing as the first nuclear bombs were dropped, killing millions of people in the space of seconds. They did not intercede as tailored biological weapons were devised and launched between the nations of the world, a type of attack so precise that it only targeted a certain type of person with a specific gene within their bodies, for it was not there way to interfere in the natural course of development for their creations.
It wasn't at all long after this that the humans developed an artificial lifeform, a lifeform whose physical abilities far surpassed anything capable by its creators, and whose intelligence was cold, calculating, and inherently evil. It was now, after watching over a millennium of senseless deaths in the name of "Food and water," or, "King and Country" that the gods finally reacted. For now the humans had created a weapon that did not age, did not get sick, a weapon that not only posed a threat to its foolish creators, but the entirety of the universe. And this, they would not tolerate.
The abomination would have to be destroyed, that much was certain, but how to do it, was a different matter entirely. Despite their powers, wisdom, and immortality, the Gods could not directly influence that which happened in their creation. It was necessary to use a representative in their place, a paladin that would uphold their will in the face of android.
But this was Earth, and as has been inferred previously, the planet was a primarily lawless place which bred individuals that were cruel, and in some cases even more evil than the creators of the android. Bringing someone from this planet into the affairs of the upper beings would be risky at best, as the very fabric of space and time could be torn apart if the population of the universe became knowledgeable of why they had come to be.
As the final tests for the abomination was completed however, the Gods became more desperate for someone to serve in their stead. No other fighters were close enough to be of service in the time allotted, so it was Illaina, the "youngest" of the three gods, that presented the idea to her sisters. They would use the only human they had ever brought to their celestial dwelling, the one they had awarded their weapon, Nilliu. They had no other alternative. They would use the man named Kerius Jarein.
In a way, its loosely tied to my previous fic here
I've written out quite a bit of this story, but I never finished, and there's still a long ways to go before I can call it done. I'm thinking about actually working on it in the near future, and permanently finishing it, but if I don't then be prepared for a cliffhanger.
Hope you enjoy ^^
***
Beginning's End
Throughout human history, there are times in which it is necessary for men to inflict harm on each other. Reason's for this often vary. Food, land, shelter, but the means to reach these goals are always the same. Conflict. Battle. Two things that while easy to initiate, were difficult to prevail in. It was soon realized by the primitive humans that perhaps conflict would be easier if they had something that would give them an advantage over their opponents.
And so men build weapons to aide them in their conflict and ultimately in reaching their goal, for the simple use of fists alone is often not enough to overpower a great number of adversaries. First came clubs, large, thick sticks carved of wood or chiseled of stone for those who possessed great strength, and they were used to bash out the brains of an enemy.
Next, were the knives. Short, sharp weapons, but these were for the greater part only made of stone, as it was soon found that wood carved thin and sharp enough to be dangerous, splintered and shattered against skin or armor.
After the knives, came swords, and thanks to the discovery of iron, these weapons were now far more effective at killing people than anything that had come before. The swords were sharp, long, and sometimes curved affairs, able to disembowel a man in a single sweep, and variations in size, and design quickly arose. Small and thin for quicker, more precision strikes, and broad and thick, for blows that could cleave a person in two.
And of course, we can't forget arrows. Powerful ranged weapons, shot from a long piece of wood with a string tightly tying the ends together. They were fairly primitive in design, but developed into quite an effective way of taking of life. No longer did you have to face your enemy, see the life force drain from his body as your weapon pierced his heart. You could kill him from afar, a hundred paces distance even, and now you didn't have to call yourself a murderer.
As the centuries past, someone came up with the idea for the gun. A brilliant weapon it was in its day. Gunpowder was used to fired a projectile, one usually of steel or some other such metal, at a person. And the best part was, it was now ever easier than before to kill. No armor could block this weapon, it was near impossible to dodge, and the effort required on the users part was quite minimal. A mere twitch of a finger was sufficient, and then your adversary would be quite dead.
More time came and went, and as people grew more "civilized" and nations and laws were created to provide for the many, humans created even more ludicrous reasons to fight. Before, it had at least been something physical, something tangible they could actually use, or needed for their survival. But as the human race had developed, the conflict their ancestor's had engaged slowly became a necessary part of life in subsequent generations, until finally battle was no longer conducted on a random basis, but as a required and controlled cycle.
Those who were in power over others manipulated their charges to create disputes, and conflicts arose that stemmed from something trivial like a person's skin color, or the way they spoke, or even the very ideas and beliefs they had in their head. And as the reasons became more absurd, technology became more advanced, and each advance provided people with increasingly vicious means in which to destroy one another. Cannons, bombs, missiles. It became so that it was no longer necessary to even be on the same continent as your foe. You could just fire a missile and watch a great many of your enemies die in the resulting conflagration.
And throughout all this, the Gods in the heaven's above had watched, fascinated, horrified, and saddened all at once at such a potentially great race being torn to pieces by their own greed, prejudice, and outright stupidity. However, they did nothing as the first nuclear bombs were dropped, killing millions of people in the space of seconds. They did not intercede as tailored biological weapons were devised and launched between the nations of the world, a type of attack so precise that it only targeted a certain type of person with a specific gene within their bodies, for it was not there way to interfere in the natural course of development for their creations.
It wasn't at all long after this that the humans developed an artificial lifeform, a lifeform whose physical abilities far surpassed anything capable by its creators, and whose intelligence was cold, calculating, and inherently evil. It was now, after watching over a millennium of senseless deaths in the name of "Food and water," or, "King and Country" that the gods finally reacted. For now the humans had created a weapon that did not age, did not get sick, a weapon that not only posed a threat to its foolish creators, but the entirety of the universe. And this, they would not tolerate.
The abomination would have to be destroyed, that much was certain, but how to do it, was a different matter entirely. Despite their powers, wisdom, and immortality, the Gods could not directly influence that which happened in their creation. It was necessary to use a representative in their place, a paladin that would uphold their will in the face of android.
But this was Earth, and as has been inferred previously, the planet was a primarily lawless place which bred individuals that were cruel, and in some cases even more evil than the creators of the android. Bringing someone from this planet into the affairs of the upper beings would be risky at best, as the very fabric of space and time could be torn apart if the population of the universe became knowledgeable of why they had come to be.
As the final tests for the abomination was completed however, the Gods became more desperate for someone to serve in their stead. No other fighters were close enough to be of service in the time allotted, so it was Illaina, the "youngest" of the three gods, that presented the idea to her sisters. They would use the only human they had ever brought to their celestial dwelling, the one they had awarded their weapon, Nilliu. They had no other alternative. They would use the man named Kerius Jarein.