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[Dask]

First off, I'd just like to say, I'm not going for that whole "Omfg I was in a depressed state when I made this so that makes this wp x100 better". Yeah, the render sux, I'm still learning so me newb renders'll have to do. btw, you kind of have to use your imagination to see the scenario......

Take a look-see

http://img60.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img60&image=Rendwp.jpg

 

[OubliezJe]

Actually, i like it. The font i dont like, it belongs, but needs different font type. If you add some ps to it, it would look awesome. 6.5,7/10

 

[EricW]

It's ok but IMO there is to much 'noise' and the text needs some blending and maybe some nice effects. I think it would contrast better if you made the text white and added in some light spots in random areas.

5.5/10 (Good but could be better)

 

[GhostfaceKillah]

the text is ugly... the render looks like a penis and a grotesque amount of pubic hair

 

[Alteh]

the text is ugly... the render looks like a penis and a grotesque amount of pubic hair

AHAHAHahahahahahAHAHAHAH omg...

Yah the text sucks, and the heart and the black box don't fit.

 

[Dask]

the text is ugly... the render looks like a penis and a grotesque amount of pubic hair

And now representing human stupidity and immaturity in all its glory.

hm...

10 chars

 

[Optimus Prime]

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