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These are lyrics not Mod Yelling LOL.


+++ Abuse +++
By: Alan

I can no longer take this **** from you or anyone else.
I've gone through this long enough I'm here to make a stand
You take it all out of me I don't get a damn thing back in return
What am I to do I fear every moment Im around you.


Everytime I mess up I get a blow to the mouth
Everytime I **** up I get a blow to the head
I just don't understand am I stupid? do you hate me?
or could it be all lof the above.


I always find ways to hide the bruises where sunglass,
long shirts and god knows I dun wear shorts.
But I just don't knwo how logn I can go hding my emotions inside.
All my friends have ideas at what is wrong but if I dare not tell them.


Everytime I mess up I get a blow to the mouth
Everytime I **** up I get a blow to the head
I just don't understand am I stupid? do you hate me?
or could it be all lof the above.


But you sick ******* you get your pleasure by beating on me,
I have a fear of coming home that you might just take my life away
for no god damn reason just because I spill some milk or I make
a mistake big or small you burst into yelling and hit me till I bleed or till I stop screaming.


Everytime I mess up I get a blow to the mouth
Everytime I **** up I get a blow to the head
I just don't understand am I stupid? do you hate me?
or could it be all lof the above.


I can't believe you do this to me I cry myself to sleep
each and everynight what if someone put you through this hell
inwhich I live everyday I bet you'd break but look at me
I'm still going strong and I may fear you but I'm not the one going to hell.


Everytime I mess up I get a blow to the mouth
Everytime I **** up I get a blow to the head
I just don't understand am I stupid? do you hate me?
or could it be all lof the above.



More of my lyrics post what ya think.
 

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They are good... but for a second there I thought you were yelling at a mod for something.... might want to say they are lyrics sooner. ^_^
 
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LOL no I dun ****ing dare to mess with the mods hehe I'd get banned *Cries* and I need to stay aroudn till atleast Beta 5 :p.

Seriously though I'd liek more comments Cause I want to improve so I need some info.
 
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I think their pretty good. They make you sound like your gonna kill someone!! Try making some peaceful songs, its to easy to make a song about hatred.

*moves to other side of room*
 
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Right.. I wrote a love song but no one seemed to reply to it...


More comments/Complaints please.
 
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When I get a bass and an amp You'll get your music to it. more comments/complaints please.
 
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i dont like it, like chipbot said when commenting on a poem once, its just kids thinking they can do good songs/porms are they put alot of saddness in it.
 
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right anyways I made a poem/song about breaking up which unless your stupid you wouldn't get very depressed and I wrote one about love so Bleh :p I can do other things then sad **** I'll post both of'm
 

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