fanfiction

Hey guys, After coldsteel told me about his story I got curious and I started my own fanfiction story. It's about an apocalyptic future and one man called Jason Connor who survived an attack from his enemy. I hope you guys like it. Please give me comments about it. Goodluck reading it...

Clouds of billowing dust and smoke circled and whirled around the young Saiyan, his vision severly impaired not only by the wall of debris, but the blood that now flowed freely over his youthful face. He stood now slumped to one side, knees bent as he struggled to remain upright. One eye refused...

I like to think I have some writing ability, and I also enjoy reading the work of others. I propose that a fanfiction forum be opened to allow people who call themselves writers (like me) to vent some creativity and get ideas. I don't think this is too much to ask, as I'm sure there are plenty...