Meet the Prince of Darkness wich is closed in a Sig!

Artwork
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1

http://img28.exs.cx/img28/7002/Ansemsig.jpg

Thanks to TekNik for his tut.!
(I used that to ^^ but forgot to leave some points ^^)

So here my new try … so as u knew!

Crits and comments plz.! :]

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Theres a patch on the right, all green-looking. Take that out. And I think you should focus the brushing more around the character itself, right now its just like… there; it seems misplaced.

Nice attempt though, 7/10

3

Oright… And thanks ^^
Any way! i done a second one!

http://img29.exs.cx/img29/2558/Takashi.jpg

Is it betta?

4

2nd one is much better, the text could be placed a little lower down so its equal distance from the border horizontally and vertically, also maybe make the stock a bit brighter… if it was me i wudnt make your sigs so wide either.

5

Ok… so here to check…

  1. I edited the Size (like Davidskiwan said) [Both]
  2. Changed the patch on the first sig[Sig 1]
  3. Changed the text place[Sig 2]

[Sig 1]
http://img101.exs.cx/img101/3083/Ansemsig2copy.jpg

[Sig 2]
http://img101.exs.cx/img101/2185/Takashicopy.jpg

Cirts and comments again!