How 'bout this one?

Not bad. The font again, seems to be out of place. It also looks pixelly. I would suggest trying a new font.

Unfortunately you haven't stuck with the right colour scheme of the character. Always follow the lead of your main image/stock or whatever it is. You should always work around the main focus of your image. Working with blue here has killed the pic, sorry to say. The blur around Pan's arm and hair is also way too obvious, try duplicating her layer, blurring it like 1.0px or less and setting the new layer under the original. Softening the edges of an image are meant to be subtle.

This red one looks better ^^ Still need some work imo though

Ah the red looks much better, good job.

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Blah! no I think the other one looks better (the first red one)

Kairi said:

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oo nice i like it good job

SaKuMa said:

Blah! no I think the other one looks better (the first red one)

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Catman said:

oo nice i like it good job

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LoL!!! What a boring place this planet would be if we would all agree :smile:

I like the newest one...