I'm open to coloring. This style I believe suits me betterI love the animation! A little colour would help with the facial expressions. was hard to make out what the face was for a second at 0:22
Thanks, dude. I'm getting mixed on that one, but I'll probably just leave it. I wanted to save the pitch.It looks and sounds very Oney G/Egoraptor inspired
Also your punchline still sounds like it has an I in it
That being said, Animation was nice
I was left aghast by your careful, unwavering display of kind faculties. Truly, such poetic words passed on are nothing but a stranger to my fiendish world of malnourished mundane mediocrity. To you, sir, I brace sincerity with a passionate death grip only to hope I may convey the unending, inherent thankfulness that lies within me. Though no mere utterance will ever fully portray the depth of my thanks to you, we will have to make due with what mortality limits us with.Pretty much what DeverZ said. Sorry to be the one to break this to you (frankly I don't understand how you didn't realize this yourself) but this is just more of the same generic, uninspired flash cartoons that all run off the same gag of silly/ loud voices at an inappropriate time + overly dramatic facial expressions. I mean, I can understand if you want to be a piece of shit and copy something popular to make money like the scumbag you are, but what did you expect by posting this here? We aren't a bunch of 14 year old kids that start burst into laughter when a silly animated face is flashed onto the screen. Be unique, be yourself, be amazing, be all the things you should be. Don't follow what's trending in the hopes of gaining quick popularity.
"Well done, you've managed to copy what thousands of other people have done a thousand times before" - Critical Error, 2015.
As something of a linguist, sure, I can't really dignify your claim as "realize" is the older variation of the word. Your previous and continuous arrogance is so astounding it warranted my trolling. You incited my condescending behavior, as your speech doesn't carry much weight and your false assumptions about my (future) work are baseless. What you've done is see a cake a chef made, and you assume that's all the chef can do. Judging by your word use, I don't believe theorizing is your forte. This unnecessary hostility you brought, like I said, is the bane of my condescension. Until you can properly present yourself to me, you're disregarded.So, instead of taking it as actual (albeit harsh) criticism, you decided to go the standard route of being salty, and replied in an unnecessarily sarcastic tone. This is why you make generic, uninspired cartoons, and it's why your art (whether it's skill or popularity) will never go anywhere in life.
Also, no, you actually misspelled the world, you didn't correct it. Where I live, and for everywhere else BUT American, the word is spelt 'realise' not 'realize' - when all else fails, and you know not of what you should speak of; you turn to grammar? Really?
What do you call a fish with no eyes?I liked the animation. Didn't get the joke though.