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[shadowcast]

Yes i know........again.......But this time ill finish it....
The current polyflow is around 700-800
Hope you like it......

 

[ShadyD]

looks good so far...
No crits yet

 

[Denz]

make the pants baggier...

keep it up

 

[.Guzzie.]

Looking good, maybe a little more detail on the pants, like outline etc. More detail on the boots and I reckon you'll come out with a really sweet model.

-GuZzie

 

[shadowcast]

Hiya.......Here is a small update.......I tried to make some folds......Not sure if its good xD

 

[.Guzzie.]

Hmmm, Lol. I dunno what to say...It looks like he has muscles bulking out from there >_<. Soz man, that doesn't look right :s. Try something else :S Look at a pic and have a good look at the folds.

-GuZzie

 

[ShadyD]

those folds are too thin and too many, just make 1 or 2 huge folds and leave the rest to the skinning

 

[klintmane]

Make the legs a little fater

 

[shadowcast]

Here is a small update......added a basic shape of the arms.....itll be probably more defined through skinning.....

still the head and hands to go

 

[kenny-DK]

Looks good so fare shadowcast :yes:

But it looks like the feet are a bit to long.. 8/10 Keep it up man..

 

[Andy011]

Yes i know........again.......But this time ill finish it....
The current polyflow is around 700-800
Hope you like it......

Yeah the leg sacks should be a bit fatter... perhaps a tad bit lower as well.

 

[shadowcast]

Some progress

 

[blaize]

what about showing some bigger pictures from different angles ?
in WIP treads, flat shaded pictures help more then smooth shaded ones, so please show some.

the shoes should be tapered.. your lower leg is thicker then your ancle
no sure if anyone noticed.. but it's polyCOUNT not polyFLOW
your model doesnt really have polyflow to speak of so..

 

[shadowcast]

the lower leg will is supposed to be a fold.....its just a big one......the rest will be made with skinning and ill show you guys some other shots in flatshaded view

 

[Kreshi]

-head too big
-eyes too big
-legs too small + very strange proportions
-neck too thick
-i can predict that the arms will come out very thin or will be screwed in the shoulder area

If you want proper help, show at least front + side pics.

@blaize
actually it has a polyflow

 

[blaize]

i know it has a polyflow.. every model has a polyflow.
what i mean is that it's a bad polyflow, imo it's to basic to be called "polyflow".

here's my idea of polyflow :smile:
http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/570/wireib9.jpg
ofcourse this model is ment as high poly

 

[Kreshi]

i know it has a polyflow.. every model has a polyflow.
what i mean is that it's a bad polyflow, imo it's to basic to be called "polyflow".

here's my idea of polyflow :smile:
http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/570/wireib9.jpg
ofcourse this model is ment as high poly

your idea of polyflow won`t fit with a DBZ charakter.
His polyflow is nice as well, :S but could tolerate some work.
In my opinion a basic polyflow is the basic for a good polyflow :S.
The final and originally touches makes the different from good to awesome.
This model actually don`t have those touches yet.