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making this up from imagination and this is what ive got :p



 
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finallly a model concepted by urself xD YUHU!

buddy looks grreat jsut the mouth looks to big and the eyes way to up <_< *eyes are in the middle of the head. also the nose looks abit unnatural but there many noses on the world :p

work oN!
 
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ok thanks try XD im planning to give her a longbow later on
 
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The face looks extremely flat. Trying giving her a bit of a profile, especially with the brow and cheeks
 
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uhm would you mind if you could make the hands straight?... if not its ok...... buddy it ownz ;)

fix da face now :O :p

GJ!
 
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ouu at first i thought it looked like a guy >_> but a woman has curves, nice sexy curves =) i think if you curved her shape a bit more to fit an hour glass figure it would look better. the hips are especially more broader compared to a man's as well..

the face also i think should have a more slender look, a more petite nose than a large one, more curves in her face as well (cheeks, more natural lips).. and a more smaller, less broad chin
 
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i would thin out her wrists somewhat, right now she looks like a fatty where her hands just... attatch to her arms. so fix that, the same goes with her ankles.

theres a lot to fix about the head. so im gonna bulletpoint the main worries:

*bring her forhead back, (it would be good if you would start posting front/side refs dude).
*define her eyebrows.
*her eyes are way too far apart.
*thin out her top lip.
*define her filtrum.
*bring her bottom lip out.
 
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try using that as a reference for lips.

the filtrum is the bit directly under the nose, where the lips make that funky shape
 
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ok it looks better :p certain things like the brows and that thing under the nose can be further defined with a skin



 
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lol nooooo dont do that style of haiiirr!! its your model but try, 1 pony-tail or just loose hair
 
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she loook like she´s stabbed :O ....

correct me if im wrong but is the neck to long and she´s no anime style i gues .... so give her a assss! <_<" and she´s to fat at the knees... wait... are those jeans or some clothing? .... buddy then dont make it look like its skin!


is she a woman? give her a biger hip and a taller belly :O
 
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also give her some chesteses shes flat as hell
 
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i gues no big changes but i see the main deforming part.... gj .. try to define the crits more.
 
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HBB.. Hips Boobs, Butts.. get to work... thats like a 13-year old out of proportions
 
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i didnt draw this i just removed inapropiate content. anyways.. note the hips.. boobs arent pronounced here so.. yeh.. and ass .. well that thing you made should be hanging over the ass in a way .... not sticking on it
 

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