Zabuza, or whatever his name is...

[jp]

Well yeah i thought zabuza was fairly easy to start with as a anime character, i know its a heavy wip,

So if you have some C&C and some tips, i would really like to hear them

And i allready noticed that the feet are a little strange...

 

[Wolf Devil]

If Zabuza saw that, you'd have a huge sword down the center of your skull >_<

The anatomy is all wrong. Torso is a bad shape, the arms and legs need more shape and to be longer, and the head needs more definition.

And even though I'm not an expert at modelling, I can still see from the wireframe that the poly flow and the mesh is all wrong...

 

[Thamuz]

lol thats why its heavy wip chief, but what he said fix up and his hair is wrong way wrong

 

[Super_vegito34]

Yeah Im not liking the hair either, thats the thing I really dont like about it, and the head...

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

If Zabuza saw that, you'd have a huge sword down the center of your skull >_<

The anatomy is all wrong. Torso is a bad shape, the arms and legs need more shape and to be longer, and the head needs more definition.

And even though I'm not an expert at modelling, I can still see from the wireframe that the poly flow and the mesh is all wrong...

the polyflow is alright for his first character model (unless u include sayamans head)

as for the rest, work more on your anatomy and redo the hair and add a little definition to his face

 

[jp]

If Zabuza saw that, you'd have a huge sword down the center of your skull >_<

The anatomy is all wrong. Torso is a bad shape, the arms and legs need more shape and to be longer, and the head needs more definition.

And even though I'm not an expert at modelling, I can still see from the wireframe that the poly flow and the mesh is all wrong...

Yoikes, i wouldn't want a sword through my skull.. >_<

Torso, after looking again yeah it was a bit off... so i changed that..

Arms longer? meh only a little then... coz its really close the the refference i used..

But more shape? okay then, but i disagree on the polyflow thing, i think its rather good.. but could be better.. but then again, everything on this planet could be better... <_<

Yeah Im not liking the hair either, thats the thing I really dont like about it, and the head...

Hmmm.. yeah i supose you guys are right about that.. (beheads the failed zaubza) i just start that over




I just saw another picture of zabuza and saw it was way different, so i willl surely redo it.

thanks for the C&C

 

[JTR]

This might help you a bit too.. Official Sheet:

Or Davidskiwan's

Else look at www.Naruto-kun.com Gallery.. They got lot of pics..

Best ref Im able to find.. Hope they'll help a bit...

 

[jp]

Thanks man, i am sure that will help...


Well i changed the head completely, i hope its a bit better now, i myself like it allot more ..

Hair could be changed though, but i won't re-do it again..

And,

OMG i gave him actual fingers... lol first fingers ever created by me.

 

[Mr. Phonso]

the head looks a lot better, about the fingers, give em more of a bend in each joint instead of just a straight box for each finger