..yesterday..

[TimTheEnchantor]

is the day that snowflakes fall..
is the day i fall asleep to the rain run around and play games..
is the day i sat and thought..
is the day i listened to my own thoughts and no one elses..
is the day i will remember the most..
is the day i realized we are all human.

*playing around with lighting and contrast.., still learning, any critiques?*

 

[Amitron]

Cool. It'd be even cooler if thats a gun (is it?) i can't tell :fight:

 

[MinesSkylineR34]

pretty sure it is
lookin good tim

 

[TimTheEnchantor]

Aye it is..

 

[dudeman]

hm i dont really lik it, its too vague.. and blurry, i also couldnt see it was a gun in the beginning, and i see what your trying to do with the contrast, but at least make it sharper.

 

[Judge]

yeah, dont really like it tim. too blurry. and you can hardly see it's a gun. just make some slight changes.

 

[Marauder]

u can hardly understand the img, abit to blurry like the rest said, and abit to dark..

 

[Alteh]

Yah, too blury. And the poem though gives me different feelings than the pic for some reason.

 

[Enix]

Well......you see, you gotta have a brain. What else could it possibly be? its metal, has a trigger, a tip thing [where the billet comes out]. I mean HELLO!! use your brains people!

Well, anyways i like it cool and stuff. Your so pro.

 

[Linda]

it can be a baton or a pipe too.............. batons are those sticks taht you beat people with. have u seen those old police cartoons? haha... they run around with batons! yay!

 

[Enix]

ummm....but i dont thing batons or pipes have triggers. [gives linda a cookie]

 

[Judge]

ummm....but i dont thing batons or pipes have triggers. [gives linda a cookie]

if a lot of people already have trouble seeing something, that means that it's already bad imo. as in, not that clear