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And what a great choice of style it is.
I like it over all, only few things that I find out of place are the pupils, I think they should touch the eye brows just a bit, and less muscle defenition.
The model itself is great, I can tell the proportions are perfect to the refs you based them on but I know what you mean about DBZ models bore you these days ;P I kinda feel the same way lol you did a nice job non the less <3 great stuff once again David.
I like it over all, only few things that I find out of place are the pupils, I think they should touch the eye brows just a bit, and less muscle defenition.
The model itself is great, I can tell the proportions are perfect to the refs you based them on but I know what you mean about DBZ models bore you these days ;P I kinda feel the same way lol you did a nice job non the less <3 great stuff once again David.
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wow that is SEX man =o
>_< indeed, modeling dbz becomes such a drag these days 
The pupils are a little low because the brows are modeled above them, If you look downwards onto him his pupils touch the eyebrows the more upwards you look at his face the more it shows =\ I dunno how to fix this though without messing up the side view or 3/4 view, hence why i said I dunno if doing so is such a good idea >_>
http://www.daizex.com/multimedia/images/covers/kanzenban/kanzenban_01.jpg - Is this what you ment darktooth >_>?
The pupils are a little low because the brows are modeled above them, If you look downwards onto him his pupils touch the eyebrows the more upwards you look at his face the more it shows =\ I dunno how to fix this though without messing up the side view or 3/4 view, hence why i said I dunno if doing so is such a good idea >_>
http://www.daizex.com/multimedia/images/covers/kanzenban/kanzenban_01.jpg - Is this what you ment darktooth >_>?
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sure winner for kama's comp!
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Sadly he missed the deadline
But its an ace model
Teach me
But its an ace model
Teach me
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I dont know, to me the skin looks really flat. Anime-esque or not, the main things i see wrong (IMO) are:
Shadows on muscles and mouth / nose are very blurry, sharpness could win here.
Not many colors in skintone.
Its a great job otherwise.
Shadows on muscles and mouth / nose are very blurry, sharpness could win here.
Not many colors in skintone.
Its a great job otherwise.
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Dave....
Please...let me have your babies. <3 I love the "Wtf?" one it's AWSOME!
You're an excellent modeller
Please...let me have your babies. <3 I love the "Wtf?" one it's AWSOME!
You're an excellent modeller
That's HOT davey!
My only crit would be to open photoshop, select the sharpen tool that's above the smudge tool, then set it to 15% strength and make the pizel size about 150px, then make sure "use all layers". Then just go over the entire skin a couple strokes to give the entire model a nice crisp look, it will get rid of the sorta-smudgy/soft looking areas such as under his eyes.
Best of luck bro!
My only crit would be to open photoshop, select the sharpen tool that's above the smudge tool, then set it to 15% strength and make the pizel size about 150px, then make sure "use all layers". Then just go over the entire skin a couple strokes to give the entire model a nice crisp look, it will get rid of the sorta-smudgy/soft looking areas such as under his eyes.
Best of luck bro!
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Sweet progress man =D looking fantastic.
Agree with Ne0 on the sharpness, just a bit of it on the skin/flesh for the crisp look and it's perfect
Awesome work man <3
Agree with Ne0 on the sharpness, just a bit of it on the skin/flesh for the crisp look and it's perfect
Awesome work man <3
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I see that Dave always makes his gokus hair very pointed , and angled ... that's not soo good
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I really love that model, he looks so cute with the eyes and all. I think the eyes are fine, I see what he means, but then again you don't see the models from this close ingame and stuff, so I don't think it's needed, that is really great, I don't have anything bad to say, I never do
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I really do think that certain areas could be "sharper" like the muscles and the eyes etc. But other than that it's pure utter sex.
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Im not trying to be rude towards you, but Its hard to not make it like that, get it right from every angle and keep it low poly, and besides, dbz hair is very sharp and angular in the later style, in early dragonball everything is much more curved, however we've already established which style im going for. If you dont like it so much, then take my outdated goku head out of your signature.Mirai_no_Trunks said:
Thanks for the comments and advice guys, I'll sharpen it up a little when i can be arsed, though not with the sharpen tool >_< sharpen tool is evil =P I dunno what to do with the muscles though since i'll either piss people off for having too defined muscles, or they'll be too blurry =\. WoW has consumed me