WIP

[Alteh]

Alright here is something Im working, just wanted to know what you think.

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

I like it. But it's a bit bright don't you think

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

i like it, but you dont have anything explaining the cut on her arm.

-sorry forgot it was a wip.

 

[Alteh]

ya, I wasn't sure about that, and it's supposed to be kinda light but it doesn't really look that bright on my comp.

 

[niracleprince]

i like it..but the right side is to bright if you ask me

 

[Alteh]

Yeah, I think I should make it not as bright.

 

[Marauder]

as the rest said, its to bright..try fixing that.....something on that piece doesnt work for me, just my taste but i dont really like it

 

[grOOvy]

Excellent stuff, and I agree - it is a bit too bright as of now.

Can't wait to see something that explains the cut on the arm though..

 

[Alteh]

I took the cut off the arm now, but I havn't really done that much else.

 

[Synth]

definately a very personal and different piece of artwork. i don't see anything wrong with it being that bright (unless it had a detailed background)

7/10