theirs no jaw line on that render, seems it goes straight up from the chin to his ears, im not sure hes supposed to look like that is he?
And the shoes are fecked, good ref pic for em is in return of Brolli movie, you get a close up shot of his shoe as hes walking towards Goten and Trunks (If you can get the movie)
His facial expression isnt brilliant, I think its the eyes that dont look right or mabye the mouth, and those rings around his arms look asif youve just created a cylinder in ms, which it should do. But for some reason it dosnt look quite right. The wrists also look a bit fat compared to the hands.
That enough Critz for you? And mate, if you want critz I know DMZ forum isnt a very good place for them (I know what the comunity their is like for sucking up) But usualy Me and Kama will give you a honest opinion, and good pointers without just saying "The models ****" like someone such as SPiN may say.
Non the less good job.
Edit** The hair does need redoing alot, its the wrong shape by far, and i looked at a ref pic and i think the head on your model is actualy a bit too big in comparrison with the rest of the body.
The gold plates on his wrist are also a bit short, which may be a result of his forearm being a tad short
http://www.dbz-fan.net/galleries/brolli/
some good ref pics their, take a peek