OMG it's such a piece of doodie. I've seen better looking hobo crap than that, scrap it, burn it, then burn the ashes, then burn the ashes of the ashes, then eat them , then burn the poop. Rinse and repeat
Anyway, seriously, i can't find anything wrong with it, it flows well. Hmm, maybe this will make it look better, try sharpening the face then maybe adding a couple of overlays, to see how it flows, because the bluriness of Robin's face is kinda hurting the overall image.