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It's too confusing, and has no flow.
 
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It looks too cluttered to me. I look at it and I really have no clue what I'm looking at, I mean I can see the render, but everything around it is so chaotic. Keep it simple and I think you'll have a better sig.
 
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Focal point is hard to make out.
 
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It looks too cluttered to me. I look at it and I really have no clue what I'm looking at, I mean I can see the render, but everything around it is so chaotic. Keep it simple and I think you'll have a better sig.
I agree with Barney.

Also I don't think that the text in the top left corner looks like it belongs there. It doesnt fit well with the rest of the sig. Other than that venoms head and the rest of the right side looks pretty good.
 
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Scary, but, I don't know, it is not clear enough. But isn't bad at all.
 
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i was just suggesting -.- .. this isnt over..
i thought there would be crits.. but to be burnt down this bad ^^

to be continued
 
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You weren't "burnt", you were given crits that you didn't like. Trial and error, if something is wrong with it, fix it to make it better.
 
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i was making a joke ^^ dont be so serious everytime matey ^^

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for comparance

 
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That one looks a lot better, but I would try and make the stock pop out a little more color-wise and then blend it with some brushes with the bg
 

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