Vegeta buu saga

[flickone]

long time havnt post ... now i wanna show you my latest project..... vegeta is one from my favorites especially majin... thx to DarkSniper for his hairs and basic shape head, to supervegeta89 for his draws crits and others....

now i need crits from you i know its still not done ... hands need to be add, neck area needs more details and some welding.... polys are 1084

waiting for crits.......

 

[Kama]

Looks really good. My only real crit is buff him up. He looks like such a tiny guy. Vegeta was short not scrawny, put some meat on that boys bones! Woo!

 

[PiXel]

good front modeling but work on the side view... he got no ass and his body need to be buffed up!

 

[flickone]

ok thx for the first crits... i buffed him in side and little in the front view

is it enough or i should buff it more?

 

[PiXel]

yes i think you need to buff him more on the body part.

 

[Ravendust]

Nice hair, don't make the muscles any bigger than you have now. Despite his strength he wasn't very muscly.

 

[Cruzharo]

Really liking it man

 

[Kama]

Dunno what you speak of Raven, during Majin Saga Vegeta was mad built.

It looks good.. but honestly, don't be afraid of adventuring a bit, give him a nice bum and a flattering package. This is Vegeta, not Chi-chi on a bad hair day.

 

[Super Veggeto]

looking quite nice there, i think the arms might look too long, or...is it's just me =/..
buff his shoulders up.
ow and can you post or model and your ref side by side?

 

[Volosity]

the nose is to small and the hairline on the side-view where it goes down it stays going down, yours is going up

 

[ZeroNightmare]

tryforce likes big butts on his men.

looks pretty sweet, best we've seen for a while, dissapointed that you didnt use the saiyan armor... but eh.

could make his bicep a wi bit more round, maybe bulk out his chest a wi bit, looks good, and add a little fat on his arse, looks kind of funky, like hes on meth or something.

 

[flickone]

thx for all of your crits i fallowed all of tham....

- i buffed him more in body area and some muscles on side view[you were right kama]
- make a bit bigger nose
- buffed shoulders
- fixed hairline
- made a bit shorter arms

about armor i think ill make one latter....

the ref pics...

major refs-front

head

arm

with the ref of side view i used basic human anatomy and that just edited it to look more to dbz

here is a new pic to crit it better and some quick easy render...

 

[IceX]

it ownz man

 

[Mr. Phonso]

ya its great but i think you should model on the pecs

 

[PiXel]

dude now its perfect, finish it.

 

[Adaptus]

Most excellent. :3

 

[Hobomaster]

wah

looks great so far

i'd like to c a skin on that

 

[Nuttzy]

hes got huge bewbies,
a tiny waist,
and it appears as though his kne has been dislocated and pushed back about 3 inches

has a good front profile though

 

[PiXel]

here is what i think....

also you got one useless line in the waist area... its the one wich goes around vegeta without any use. Anyway.. deform the shoulders and knees if ya like to know how to deform the knees ask me... i already showed u the shoulders.

 

[flickone]

thx guys for nice coments and good crits ..... thx tryforce for a drawover.. i just fixed it ..here is pic