Woah, calm down people... Ryeko is entitled to his opinions and advice.
The model is great overall, and it doesn't hurt for him to try and point out something he feels was a mistake or something that can be improved. That's why we have a Suggestions Forum in the first place. The ESF team likes to hear to what fans have to say.
theres nothign wrong with the model, it was simple rendered like that and its not a perfect straigth view
the model was most likely mirrored from one side so each side is exactly like the other
along with that the place you started the line from on the armpit is the exact place on both sides which will cause it not to be perfect