Uzumaki Naruto (Younger Version)

[Elemental]

Hey well I have to practise skinning cell shade for a naruto mod so this will be my practise round.Note this model is not for the mod it was done by reckoning of fire with some edits by me, so if u'll want to know what its going to be used for ask Reck.

i know cause its cell shade there is not alot to c&c but wat im realy looking for is
does it have the naruto feeling etc anyway c&c welcome

 

[DMW]

Nice start,i like the way he is cell shaded,cant wait to see more progress.

 

[Sadner]

I guess it's looking okey
He just looks a bit femanen cause he has cat eyes. if ya fix that he'll look a lot better

And remember, even a cellshaded skin should have shading. look at the Naruto GC games ^__^

 

[Elemental]

firstly i dont understand wat u mean Randy i used that pic as a ref when i drew the eyes with meh new tablet and then you post the same pic rofl on how to correct them but i'll check it out and see if i made any mistakes thanx.anyway okay so u want an extra shade of shadow np

 

[Hamppu]

Sweet! the hairs just bothers me looks little stupid xD but great start. /me loves cell shaded models!

 

[Sadner]

firstly i dont understand wat u mean Randy i used that pic as a ref when i drew the eyes with meh new tablet and then you post the same pic rofl on how to correct them but i'll check it out and see if i made any mistakes thanx.anyway okay so u want an extra shade of shadow np

lol, i can see a big difference, can you?
Your eyes are to cat-ish ,correct that and it will look 10x better i assure you.

tip of today!: Keep your hand still when you draw =p

 

[Elemental]

kay kay thanx man will do it when i get some time ^^

 

[Adaptus]

The face looks almost perfect. I don't watch/read Naruto, but I kinda know what he looks like, and I think he looks spot on. Great work, keep it up.

 

[PiXel]

wat im realy looking for is does it have the naruto feeling?

yes, it have it.

tip of today!: Keep your hand still when you draw =p

Fixer of the "tip of today!" is Tryforce:
Tip of Today: Keep your hand still when you draw or use the pen tool. =P

 

[CM]

The problem with the cat-ish eye is that your skinmap is probably stretched, and really bad. I can see similar problems with the mouth, nose, and everything. What resolution are you skinning in, 8x8? Cause the skin is terribly pixelated and blurry. You're probably spending one little corner of a 256x256 on the face. Don't.

 

[TrIdAn]

Nise, you maybe could fix the black lines a little, the ones u skined not the outside ones.
make them more hard and darker.

 

[darkganon]

i think the model is looking good keep up the good work :yes:

 

[Elemental]

update, havent put much work in due to other projects but i think unless i get some good critz on how to fix the torso i'll restart it.

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

W00t im really digging it elemental nice job =)

Sweet! the hairs just bothers me looks little stupid xD but great start. /me loves cell shaded models!

Man comments like these really piss me off, first if you read its the skin he wants coments, 2nd you just called my work stupid, like dude it would be fine if u just said hair bothers me a bit rather than jsut callin it stupid then xDing at me

The problem with the cat-ish eye is that your skinmap is probably stretched, and really bad. I can see similar problems with the mouth, nose, and everything. What resolution are you skinning in, 8x8? Cause the skin is terribly pixelated and blurry. You're probably spending one little corner of a 256x256 on the face. Don't.

The skinmap of the head takes up about 512x512, dont blame him for nethin, i did the maps and all so yea =P

 

[-Nataku-]

the cell shading is going great! i can help you with the shading couse i got lots of cell shading plugins! plugins that are smoothing the outlines and such =] lookin great overall

 

[Green Wolfos]

Looks amazing to me. Only crit: Finish the model!

 

[TrIdAn]

its good, but face skin could do better on those black lines.

PS. what modelling program u using?

 

[-Nataku-]

he is using 3D studio max 7 i think i anwsered your question
Elemental should post and update soon couse he grabed some of my cell shading plugins .

 

[Green Wolfos]

It looks very nice to me. Can't wait to see the update!

 

[itachi137]

yah man it looks really nice