Trunks...

[Denz]

What version of him to model? with Capsule corp jacket thing or without it?

ok here's what I got so far

also I plan to make him long haired one with alpha mapped hair (which I must learn first)

p.s. ssj and ussj version after this one

 

[~Dark Trunks~]

looks good so far but u should make the one wit the long hair and black tanktop since no ones has made one yet

 

[Denz]

you mean like in your signature (but with long hair)?

 

[~Dark Trunks~]

ya ill show a pic

long hair ssj



long hair normal

 

[The_Real_Legend]

I say a ussj version of the capsule corp trunks with long hair.
Btw he kind of already looks like a ussj, with that thick neck and large chest.
Might be me though.

I love the side but from the front his face looks to round and his eyes to stretched out or something

 

[Growler]

His eyebrows stretch too far back, nose protrudes too much

 

[D2]

its just a colored poly to give you an idea....

Anyways I think it looks pretty slick so far. only one thing on the frontview of the nose is buggin me. looks more |_| then /_\ (kinda hard to explain with ascii art )

But anyway's im lookin forward to see this finished (and my vote also goes to the black tanktop version)

 

[IceX]

make it still sharp but dont make it so long the nose i mean

 

[Suh Dude]

Looking good Dendza, looking good.

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

His face looks a little too wide and just pull the nose bit a tad like the others said

Oh and dan you should know those are colorued polies

 

[zeldalink]

hehe i knew you would gona do this eventualy looking good so far bro

 

[VirusMC]

u should make the one wit the long hair and black tanktop since no ones has made one yet

you mean like in your signature (but with long hair)?

I found one.. I'm not sure who gets all the credits for it, but I'm pretty sure it was skinned by NeD..

 

[Kama]

Whoa christ... Looks like he's been rubbing Soot all over his body..

Looking nice Dend, finish him up and don't skimp on the package.

 

[Denz]

ok heres what I did:

*fixed teh nose like yus guys said
*added some primitive folds (no critics needed for them cuz Im not finished with them)
*added some shoes which I wont touch anymore
*pants ;_; (0% of them aka heavy wip)

 

[Almighty_Gir]

make new arms from scratch, instead of just taking ones off of other models. trunks's arms were completely different in build from piccolo.

plus, the arms arent too great, and it wouldnt hurt you to practice.

the biceps are too long the shoulders are too low, and his torso is too wide at the top.

 

[Denz]

I realy dont need to practice making new arms man
if I start modeling new ones I will loose all will and probably get bored making ones trust me.
Plus this arms arent too great as you said but they will finish the job atm

making new arms are my last thing to worry
if you realy think that they suck I will edit those and make what ever you say is wrong with 'em.

 

[Almighty_Gir]

like i said, they are too low on the body, and are too long. the bicep is musproportionately long compared with the rest of the arm also.

 

[Super Veggeto]

torso look HUGE!!
or legs too small.. =P
looking quite nice though!
i think the face could use more work, ill probably make a drawover for you but later ^_^
carry on for now ;P

 

[The_Real_Legend]

From the side it looks like he has soggy tits or something. The vest really doesn't need to protrude like that. It was kind of stretchy and definetly not that baggy.

The arms look fine to me, only from the side the shoulder and bicep are huge, fix that please.

Also i still think his face looks way to roundish. Trunks has a sharp face like vegeta and he's a lot less muscular than that.

But great work man the boots and folds look very good and i love those hands.

 

[Denz]

next up > fixing shirt folds

p.s. I will tweek pants a little so its still a wip