Trunks without jacket, long hair, maybe release for ESF??

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Dunno but something is missing on the Skin.

I think the Clothes are to Dark for SSJ version since they lighten up a little when they go SSJ.

And the Strains where are falling in his face are Green o_O.


BTW: hope im not too late to wish everyhting good for da birthday o_o
 
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I think the one that is causing the problem is the skin on the body part because it's dark and his face skin is much lighter.
 

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Yea the face is a bit bright compared to teh rest of the body.
 
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He looks a little like Cloud :D.His sword looks a little too short. Other than that, great!
 
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o.0 i expected crapper comments lol, anyway i got a massive update for you, ill make the sowrd a bit longer. i will finish skinning the torso (i hate skinning those folds :( ) and i will redo some of the flesh :) anway here it is



edit: ssjgoku83, ur siggy makes me happy :)
 
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dodge the hair more, its too dull.

i'd reskin the blade on the sword. make it look straight.
 
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wtf? 'sif dodge the hair more!

brushes = win just paint a couple of "grain" lines into the hair
 
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and dont do so much folds in the pants man and especialy near his a$$ :p if it was like that irl he would have had REALY baggy pants but for the rest its good lookin ^_^
 
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to fit in that torso he needs smaller arms and legs. But if u want to make a bigger sword u need to make a bigger torso and the legs are gonna be to longggg either.
 
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wha?? dude, im working with the esf skeleton so i can not make major changes to the body, heh, i think the proportions look decent enough

anyway i got some of the torso done :p gonna make the flesh better now o.0

 
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Why, why JPG's? It's all blurry :( can't really crit the skin like that =\
only crits so far: I think you overdid the folds on the pants and the crotch seems weird (can't put my finger...)
Other than that gj :yes: really nice :)
 

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He does look just a little blurry,the folds dont bother me to much,i think he is fine as he is though.So cant wait for release,i have been waiting for a trunks model like this one.
 
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Looking good, but make the hair more lighter. The folds on his pants looks ok to me but fix the lines on his crotch. Good job ReCkOninG of FirE.
 
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yeh its getting there ^^

But on the (uem dunno the word in english for that) the part where is connected to hand, that arm. Erm you have giving him muscles okeh but not on the arm short arm.On the pic its above the Hand and below the Bozeps this part of arm i mean. there is something missing i think.

Hope you know what i mean cause i cant explain it better :p
 
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It looks cool.there's something wrong with the arm though(the model,not the skin >_<).I think you need to put more shape into them,they look to straight now.Btw why are you not online anymore o_O
 
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the fold that goes across the crotch shouldnt be there (the horizontal one) plus there are a lot of parts on the pants that are saturated

but me thinks its good and that the sword should be longer

btw SSJGoku83, nice siggy
 
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i think the head is to short and the forarm lacks mucel..... the sholders and bicepts are perfict imo
 

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