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this one is none 3D also, but, this one is not so good as the other one, its the same idea, only a different scene, this one is that small Gohan San made a blast of anger, the BG is the energy floating from the blast, yes, i know the gohan isnt that good quality...
 
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work on it some more. the gohan is jaggy trim the edges better...add some typography. Its overall look is so bland having gohan in the center...the gohan and the BG looking like seperate images...just work on it some more.
 
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well thats the intention, then you see that gohan is the " cauze of the energy "
so you concentrate on the gohan, uc?
 
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what was ur intention.... i dont get it drawing some1's eyes to and unattractive point isnt a good idea.

your concept is good but very poor execution
 
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yeah what roshi said, and why did you do a solid looking border on gohan? or was that already there? Typography is good to add, and it can look really good if done right
 
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I liked the other one better, having ther center as a focal point doesn't look as good as a more asymetrical bg.
 
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lol, are you blind? this is a total different one!

BTW i no i am n00b, and i am foreign to english, so, whats typegraphy?
 
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Using words! :D Even though the bg is different, it's the same effect, and the Gohan doesn't look good. It isn't cut out well, and if you're going to have an outer glow, you shouldn't make it so solid as it is.
 
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Ok let me recrit this.
It is too plain and it looks like you used the same bg.
Try fading in some more pics of Gohan in the back, or enlarge the Gohan pic already in it.
 

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try to keep it one or two colors, mix some effects, add some typography, try to find a fitting font, make sure it's readable, just try a lot in photoshop, look at other wp's (to learn) , at this point I agree with roshi

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its a pritty good bg, but i think that the gohan pic is out of place, maybe choose another one or change the colors abit..
gj :)
 

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