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[Fire Phoenix]

Interesting read, while you've taken some licenses with the characters, you definately have done them justice with small homages here and there. I also like the fact that your literary ability is coming up to speed with your imagination. Keep up the good work Smith.

Agreed on your literary ability. It's smooth and easy to read. I found it interesting and very descriptive. Easy to put an image in my head

Only thing I see wrong with it, is you spelled my name wrong. O before E

Fire Phoenix

Thanks for adding me though. I felt special :yes: :yes: :yes:

 

[Raeku]

This is very good. Its easy to read and its funny. I hope I'll make it into the fic.

 

[imported_KelesK]

Interesting read, while you've taken some licenses with the characters, you definately have done them justice with small homages here and there. I also like the fact that your literary ability is coming up to speed with your imagination. Keep up the good work Smith.

Indeed I second this.. Great work Smith!

Seriously though, I'm curious to see how you think Cuc can die.

You know exactly how Cuc can die old one :devgrin:

 

[DiebytheSword]

Indeed I second this.. Great work Smith!

You know exactly how Cuc can die old one :devgrin:

Indeed I do, and you have nothing to do with it monkey 8)

 

[SaiyanPrideXIX]

If the Reaper Incarnate can't do it, no one can.

Regardless, I agree on all fronts, Smith, the story is very well written, and fortunately your lack of convolution makes it so that, unlike the things I write, it gives enough to get a good picture without being what my editor friend calls "TMS-GO" -- Too Much **** Going On.

 

[imported_KelesK]

Indeed I do, and you have nothing to do with it monkey 8)

You can be so mean sometimes Cucy :cry:

 

[Raeku]

If the Reaper Incarnate can't do it, no one can.

Indeed I have tried.

@on-topic: I really hope this fic goes on till the end and doesnt just die out, as fics often do.

 

[Grega]

I really hope this fic goes on till the end and doesnt just die out, as fics often do.

Seconded. Realy like the way you write that. Good work Smith|


But howcome evryone who is mod or admin is wearing black O.O

 

[DiebytheSword]

After discussing the plot with Smith, I will be guest writing one or two installments of this fan fic.

 

[Grega]

After discussing the plot with Smith, I will be guest writing one or two installments of this fan fic.

Congrats. Hope you can hold up with Smith ^^

 

[Fire Phoenix]

Congrats. Hope you can hold up with Smith ^^

The only way possible is if he wrote a 500 word story consisting of only 'Fire' and 'Phoenix'

Hell I'd read it

Ontopic: by guest installments do you mean like... fillers? or will it actually be apart of the story? Or will it be like a sub chapter?

 

[Zeonix]

I think he means chapters.

I heard good things, I read it, I enjoyed it so I'll give you 2 thumbs up.

:yes::yes:

 

[Smith|]

Seconded. Realy like the way you write that. Good work Smith|


But howcome evryone who is mod or admin is wearing black O.O

Thanks =). I try to read their bio in the fight club thread and use parts of it.

 

[Scruff]

Ah, another Forum Fanfic. I love these ^_^. Looking great so far, can't wait for more.

 

[DiebytheSword]

It's like old times, eh Scruff?

 

[Synth]

Not bad Smizzle... and interesting way to use a tripod in plotscheme.

 

[Fire Phoenix]

Not bad Smizzle... and interesting way to use a tripod in plotscheme.

The tripod reminded me of that one thing in HL2. If you know what I'm talking about. That thing with three legs, and shot at you. God they were a pain in the ass. Except you gave it a different color and design to it.

Out of curiosity, do you know how many chapters this will be?

Oh, i like how you made each seperate forum a building. I thought that was awsome. I pictured it being that one map for 1.3 where you can throw busses.

I don't know if I'm the only one picturing it like that. But that's how I see it. Give it that ESF feel

 

[Smith|]

The tripod reminded me of that one thing in HL2. If you know what I'm talking about. That thing with three legs, and shot at you. God they were a pain in the ass. Except you gave it a different color and design to it.

If you've seen War of the Worlds, that's the Tripod I'm going for.

Out of curiosity, do you know how many chapters this will be?

Never know .

 

[Scruff]

It's like old times, eh Scruff?

Ahhh yes, the good ol' days. xD

 

[Kaination]

I need.... MORE!

D:

When are you gonna post updates?