test model wip

[dynamic`]

this is my first model
all it is for is trying to model
i probably wont finish it but here it is

 

[Gourmet]

GJ man! nice work cant really critz anything cuz im not a modeler so i dont know what to look for but i like what i see anyway

 

[Kreshi]

For a first model it´s good.

The proportions are very strange and u have too much useless polys.
Reduce the useless polys to an acceptable format.

And the skin looks good :yes:

But you should know, that you can´t make a great model with just "extrude" and "move" faces and vertexes...

Try to make some parts "poly by poly"... :yes:

 

[dynamic`]

the proportions arent strange, its just the angle of the pics. thats whats super buu looks like

 

[zeldalink]

try welding it in the center

 

[dynamic`]

im probably not gonna do too much more on it so if some body wants it just tell me

 

[zeldalink]

shure send it to me ill finish it i was working on a kid buu but i think i can use parts of my bu on yours

can u mail it to : [email protected]

 

[Suh Dude]

can you make a render with no shadows? i see something familiar about the skin.
and like kreshi said, too much wasted polys. and the body center isnt connected.

 

[dynamic`]

nothing should look fimilar on the skin because its 100 % done by me unless u mean fimilar to what buu looks like on the show

 

[Suh Dude]

Dude, dont show me your skin, the skin in the model with no shadows :/

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

too much polies on teh chest alone.. how much is it?

 

[dynamic`]

i never meant the model for esf i just made one to make one and slim, u hinted at saying that uve seen that skin before. i posted the skin to show that it was 100 % mine

 

[Mr Smo]

yup, very high poly there, bit exagerated in places, but nice start. Skin is good 2