Tenshinhan draw , what do u guys think?

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wow i wish i could draw like you, hes look very nice.
good job. can you make a bebi vegeta?
 
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Maybe i can , gimme just a pic , i never saw him right , just so i know how he is looking
 
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I'll critique it honestly....artist to artist(yes, I can draw..rather well. I just don't show off my stuff).

The musculature is done fairly well....its not extremely proportionate, but it gets the job done..sort of.
Overall..I get the feeling that h'e stoo....SQUAT...too wide, too short..
Yeah, Tenshinhan WAS a big guy....but.....not that big.

The clothing is VERY stiff...it doesn't flow well at all....
the rips seem to make that problem worse.

The face....is alright.
I can tell whose face it is...but it doesn't match the character extremely well.

Overall....not too shabby.
 
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bah i hate it



but i think thats mainly cause i hate tien...
 
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It's good, but like Chimpbot said, it's also a bit out of proportions, like the arms and legs are a bit too small for the body.
 
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I didn't look wrong.
I studied it like I do every piece....

I've been doing htis for years, my eye isn't off by much.
I'm very good at judging distances and such on paper, like line length and things.

Your sketch is disproportionate.
It's fairly well done, but no where near perfection.
Like I mentioned, I can tell who it's supposed to be...but thats it.

Plus, I hate the way you did the clothing.....it looks too starched....WAY too stiff.

That's my critique of your piece.....

My one piece of advice is:
if you can't take critisism, don't bother posting your stuff.

Just saying.
 

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Well yea , mega thats not your best work , why dont you show them theese great pics you showed in the other Forums , like this toni test or what it was
 
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Originally posted by Chimpbot
I didn't look wrong.
I studied it like I do every piece....

I've been doing htis for years, my eye isn't off by much.
I'm very good at judging distances and such on paper, like line length and things.

Your sketch is disproportionate.
It's fairly well done, but no where near perfection.
Like I mentioned, I can tell who it's supposed to be...but thats it.

Plus, I hate the way you did the clothing.....it looks too starched....WAY too stiff.

That's my critique of your piece.....

My one piece of advice is:
if you can't take critisism, don't bother posting your stuff.

Just saying.
i think i can take criticism good , cuz i know that not every of my pics is that good , i will show you some better pics soon(when i finished drawing them) but i feel bored at drawing this time lol!

@ Ranma: I will show them the toni when i have finished it, the one u saw was just a test!
 
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I like that picture....

I have some nice fan art myself, but i got some problems with my homepage...
( Cant upload, well ill get that working soon )

BTW to everyone that is in my RPG....it will first open on the 1st of Juni
 
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I wish I had a scanner..
I'd love to post some of my stuff.....

I just can't right now..

*sigh*

I love showing off my stuff :D
 
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well hes cool and all but the head lins are still on him if im seeing right or you could of drawn them there on purpose

plus he looks a little to buff and his jagen(third eye)is kind of poking out

thats a really good picture i give it a 9.8 out of ten
 
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looks more like a sticker to me :p
 

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