Teen Gohan WIP

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ill start on the hands tomorrow and the head later on.
crits are welcome, drawovers will help alot too =D
 
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aww, everyone makes good arms but me :(

j/k

Love those arms, reminds me a bit of cj kinda.

Everythings good except for the pointy ass.
 
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lol yea the ass is too pointy, ill fix that ;)
 
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Super vegetto FTW >;0

good going man, that is really looking good... but like MZG said, round out the ass :eek:
 
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Sv, you've been one of the best modellers i've ever seen. I rekon a model is just as good as a skin.

On topic: THAT IS AN AWESOME GOHAN MODEL!!! I was going to post a WIP of mine but this just blows it totally out of the water. Keep up the good work, those are sum sexeh arms!
 

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Awsome SV! i love it, and finally some good arms to, most arms look to.... skinny...

heh, and that popov says your sucks? from what planet is he? :p

Keep it up SV!
 
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so far i have loved all your model for esf, i have allways used your Vegeta models and i hope this gohan is gona be as good as your vegeta models or even better, i made drawover because i dont think the pants have the right baggyness so here it goes, im not so very good at drawovers but i hope it gives you some idea how they should look IMO, and the shirt hanged too much so i edited that a little. :)

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wow its looking so good ...sv you are the best...
 

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Vegeta Jr said:
so far i have loved all your model for esf, i have allways used your Vegeta models and i hope this gohan is gona be as good as your vegeta models or even better, i made drawover because i dont think the pants have the right baggyness so here it goes, im not so very good at drawovers but i hope it gives you some idea how they should look IMO, and the shirt hanged too much so i edited that a little. :)

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But you only blurred a little at the pants.....

now you destroyed the folds...
 
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he smudged .... and blured....
SV just do it ;) i know ull release it and everybody will dl it ^^ anyway... sofar no crits :p it´s even better then ur old teen gohan :D and the polys are oright ..i think!
 
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Small Update:



finished hands as you can see.
and as Vegeta Jr mentioned:
fixed the ass, it's not pointy now :p
fixed the shirt from the side view
widen the pants from the side view

ok, keep criting guys ^_^, mean while ill work on the head =P oh and refs will help alot :D
 
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torso looks abit to wide i think
other then that it looks great, cant wait to see the final product.
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Nice it looks good its just the muscles on the arm is kinda to low and a little weird lookin but the rest is good.
 
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The model looks very, very promising Veggeto, good job.

By the way, how many polies is it now?
 
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Now that's my private map modeler =D

Awesome models as allways. Can't wait to peak under zeq 2's skirt ;)
 
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@Marauder: here is the ref i used (also for those who want to see the proportions), according to it the torso is good.


@True-Warrior15: i cant seem to understand what the problem is, try to be a bit more specific =D

@Vegeta Jr: thank you =)

@The_Forgotten: thanks ^_^ 1616 polys so far...heh it's no exacly as i planned but it's alright. head shouldnt take much so maybe somewhere in 1900+-? we'll just have to wait and see =P

LOL thanks cold :D

i have some refs for the hair and face but the prob is that he looks diffrent in some of them so ill post some here and you help me choose =) ofcourse you can post some of your own refs if you want :smile:
 
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ya porportions look fine to me, just get those refs up so we can help ya pick :p
 
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You should follow your ref considering the shoulders. They should face down in an angle. They can't be horizontal like that.
You might want to lower the part where the pants seperate too.
Also the legs are way to skinny from the side.

Otherwise looking good man! ;)
 
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