Originally posted by Pariah
ok...gonna just look at things for a second then do this.....
ok here we go...WAY too thin...he looks like less of a string bean piece of gum than he really was...especially in the waist, the chin should be blended much better into the neck...and something most people dont get...buu was basically a piece of gum..he didnt really have too many defining lines with shadows...just areas where it seemed to be darker...black isnt the best color to use on him for defenition, use a darker pink color...but that chin/neck thing really throws the head off
1) The model is not mine. SS_Vegeta made it. I only textured him. Address your model critiques toward him.
2) Look closer before you critique. I didn't use black on ANY part of his flesh. It consists of differant pink tones.
3) The tone variation from the neck and chin is because of smoothing groups. You get one of two things:
a> A serious dark/light dividing because both faces are smoothed into one another.
b> A sharp, jagged line, from taking the smoothing groups off.
In short, try to develop a keener eye before critiquing people's work. Or at the very least, know what the hell you are talking about